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Old October 20, 2008, 07:30 AM
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Nueva introducción

I haven't been using my Spanish very much, so I thought I would write a new introduction - in Spanish. I would like if you would correct my errors, and comment on my Spanish.

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Este es mi introducción nueva - en español.

Soy desde Dinamarca, pero nacía en Finlandia - mudamos a la Dinamarca cuando fui dos. Hablo danés fluentemente, bueno inglés, y pico finlandés y alemán. Me inscribí a este foro practicar y usar mi español.

He estudiado español desde este agosto. Comencé estudiando español porque he comenzado leyendo sobre Mesoamérica y su cultura y historia. Especialmente los mayas me interesa y sus idiomas. También he considerado sobre viajando por allí cuando he acabando la escuela. Hasta ya he estudiado en mi casa, solo, pero comenzaré estudiando en mi escuela, después la Navidad.

¡Correcciones son muy bienvenido, gracias!

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It took me quite some time to write it, about twenty minutes, and some use of my dictionaries, but I believe it's a good practice anyway. I've marked parts of the text which I'm very unsure about with a blue color.
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Old October 20, 2008, 07:50 AM
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I haven't been using my Spanish very much, so I thought I would write a new introduction - in Spanish. I would like if you would correct my errors, and comment on my Spanish.

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Este es mi introducción nueva - en español.

Soy de Dinamarca, pero nací en Finlandia - mudamos a la Dinamarca cuando tenía dos años. Hablo danés fluidamente, inglés bien, y poco finlandés y alemán. Me inscribí a este foro para practicar y usar mi español.

He estudiado español desde este agosto. Comencé a estudiar español porque he comenzado a leer sobre Mesoamérica y su cultura y historia. Especialmente los mayas me interesa y sus idiomas. También he considerado viajar allí cuando he acabo mis estudios en la escuela. Hasta ahora he estudiado en mi casa, solo, pero comenzaré a estudiar en mi escuela, después la Navidad.

¡Correcciones son muy bienvenidos, gracias!(Invito sus correcciones. Gracias sounds better)

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It took me quite some time to write it, about twenty minutes, and some use of my dictionaries, but I believe it's a good practice anyway. I've marked parts of the text which I'm very unsure about with a blue color.
You wrote very clearly. Although there were errors, anyone would understand you.
For someone who is studying on their own, you have done well.
If you get to Mexico City, be sure to visit to Museum of Anthropology. There you can compare the artifacts of the Meso-american empires.It's pretty interesting. Aztec sculptures can be terrifying.
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Old October 20, 2008, 08:49 AM
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Coincido con Poli, you've done quite well!

In addition to the corrections made by Poli, here are a few more:

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... sobre Mesoamérica y su cultura e historia. Especialmente me interesan los mayas y sus idiomas. También he considerado viajar allí cuando he acabadomis estudios en la escuela.
It is also possible, and more common with length-of-time expressions, to use the hacer + que + present tense structure:
Hace dos meses que estudio español. = I've studied Spanish for two months.
Or the present tense + desde hace + time length structure:
Estudio español desde hace agosto. = I've studied Spanish since August.
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Old October 20, 2008, 09:47 AM
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Felicidades! Lo has hecho muy bien. Claro había errores pero la idea era muy clara.

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Old October 20, 2008, 03:07 PM
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I haven't been using my Spanish very much, so I thought I would write a new introduction - in Spanish. I would like if you would correct my errors, and comment on my Spanish.

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Esta es mi nueva introduccíon en español.

Soy de Dinamarca, pero nací en Finlandia - nos mudamos a Dinamarca . Hablo danés fluentemente, igual inglés, y trato Finlandés y Alemán. Me inscribí a este foro para practicar y usar mi español.

He estudiado español desde Agosto. Comencé estudiando mi español porque he comenze a leer sobre Mesoamérica y la cultura. Me interezan especialmente los mayas y sus dialectos. También he considerado sobre viajar a Mexico cuando acabe la escuela. Hasta ya estoy estudiado [COLOR=Blue]en mi casa yo solo, pero comenzaré a estudiar en mi escuela, terminando el año nuevo..

¡Tus correcciones son bienvenidas gracias!

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It took me quite some time to write it, about twenty minutes, and some use of my dictionaries, but I believe it's a good practice anyway. I've marked parts of the text which I'm very unsure about with a blue color.

Danes, I will correct to you now, well it before that I will correct to you, I want to say some words, I took me the free of read your introduction above you and your learning in the school, well I tell you if you make mistakes but in really is good your text, I know that my English is not as good as you, but I don't delay twenty minutes writing this text for you, you try to be faster, or practice more with someone who knows Spanish, then when you have awfully practice and domain above your language, I affirm you that you will be happy.

I hope you don't mind with me.
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Old October 20, 2008, 10:52 PM
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You wrote very clearly. Although there were errors, anyone would understand you.
For someone who is studying on their own, you have done well.
If you get to Mexico City, be sure to visit to Museum of Anthropology. There you can compare the artifacts of the Meso-american empires.It's pretty interesting. Aztec sculptures can be terrifying.
Gracias, poli. ¡Agradezco su correcciones!
¿Ha estado en el museo tú mismo?

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Coincido con Poli, you've done quite well!
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It is also possible, and more common with length-of-time expressions, to use the hacer + que + present tense structure:
Hace dos meses que estudio español. = I've studied Spanish for two months.
Or the present tense + desde hace + time length structure:
Estudio español desde hace agosto. = I've studied Spanish since August.
Good tip. I remember I have read something about this before. I guess I should read up on it again. And thank you for the corrections!

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Felicidades! Lo has hecho muy bien. Claro había errores pero la idea era muy clara.
¡Gracias, Elaina!

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and your learning in the school,
I'm not having Spanish in school, or having any other kinds of professional teaching - yet. As I stated in my text, it will first start after Christmas - or actually, I just found out it will start today, so I'm sorry about the earlier misinformation. I'm excited about how it's going to be!

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but I don't delay twenty minutes writing this text for you, you try to be faster,
This is the first longer text I'm writing, and I prefer to spend time on what I'm doing in order to try to make it better. I prefer going for the quality, and not the quantity. I'm sure you would do better with your English as well, if you spend some more time on writing your posts.

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I hope you don't mind with me.
Of course not! It's always good to get some other opinions on a case, and other points of view.
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¡Muy bien hecho Danés! Tienes muy poco tiempo estudiando el español, y ya escribes muy bien.
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Old October 21, 2008, 07:45 AM
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¡Gracias, Tomísimo!

I had my first two lessons (2 x 45 minutes - the teacher was 15 minutes late though) of Spanish today. It was pretty simple though. They only taught us basic stuff like how to conjugate ser, hablar and visitar in present tense, and some few words like madre, padre, alemán, inglés, y, hermano, hermana, etc. I think it will continue on that stage for quite some time, as all the others had problems. But well, I've been studying it on my own for some while, so I just have to have a little patience.
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Old October 21, 2008, 08:26 AM
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Be patient with your classmates. If you assist a friend in learning, it will reinforce what you have already learned and make you stronger and a better problem solver.
I agree. Teaching is one of the best ways to learn and consolidate your knowledge.
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