Look what I got on the test!!

[lee ying]

croalito what are you talking about ? dime en que estoy mal por favor.

gracias por avisar me.

[CrOtALiTo]

Please you read again your post, in your post lack words.

[Jessica]

Crotalito, what words does lee ying lack?

[CrOtALiTo]

of course, jessica, you can do it! if you want to be better you need to study everyday more and more, look , i like to speak english but i can´t yet. and i try to study something everyday, i watch movies,isten to music and i rea some book, but to lear english takes time but someday i´ll do first god, tomisimo he has right an the deciton is in you. Do you understand me?


i- this word is a pronoun and it should to be write in capital letter.


It was my attempt.

[Jessica]

of course, jessica, you can do it! if you want to be better you need to study everyday more and more, look , i like to speak english but i can´t yet. and i try to study something everyday, i watch movies, listen to music and i read some book, but to learn english takes time but someday i´ll do first god, tomisimo he has right an the deciton<<??? is in you. Do you understand me?
The red letters are the ones that are one...I will fix them
my attempt hahaha

and Crotalito, lee ying wasn't lacking any words.....maybe he has some mistakes, but not lacking any words

[CrOtALiTo]

On the post faulted some words, he cans fix them now.

[lee ying]

yes, I know, I have any problems but the first problem is the keyboard lol..my laptop is at home. now i´m in a ciber . thank to you 2.. lol

[Jessica]

On the post he made mistakes on some words, but now he can fix them/but he can fix them now.

Correction above.

[Jessica]

I thought I did bad on the essay...and the vocab and grammar part...turns out that I got a perfect on the essay (with the comment "Muy bien") and lost 10 points in the vocab and grammar part...

[bobjenkins]

It,s a good score in my opinion