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Old April 06, 2014, 07:11 AM
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Smile Please correct my short writing passage:

I'm new so please go easy, I am trying to improve by writing short passages.

Here goes:

Hoy de ido al gimnasio, mas tarde fui a nadar con mi hijo Harry.
Despues tenemos un helado y jugamos en el parque.

es todo para hoy,

Gracias.
Alan
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Hoy de ido al gimnasio. Mas tarde, fui a nadar con mi hijo Harry.
Despues, tenemos un helado y jugamos en el parque.

es todo para hoy.

Gracias.
He marcado todo lo que debes de corregir en rojo. Te he corregido la puntuación, también, marcado en púrpura.

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