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Old January 02, 2016, 12:46 PM
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"Los cuentos infantiles tradicionales no son tan inocentes como parecen. Según el análisis de los psicoanalistas, tienen subtextos que tratan, por ejemplo, del complejo de Edipo/Electra y del miedo a la muerte. Por ejemplo, si analizas el cuento de hadas “Bella y Bestia” a un nivel profundo, puedes ver que se trata de un cambio de lealtad siguiendo el patrón edípico, es decir, del padre al marido. También es sobre el miedo de tener relaciones sexuales, que es lo que verdaderamente representa la “bestialidad” de la Bestia. Los feministas critican que cuentos tradicionales como “Bella y Bestia” transmiten ideas arcaicas sobre los papeles de la mujer y la importancia de los hombres (padres y esposos) en sus vidas. Tal vez debemos examinar estos cuentos con una mirada crítica antes de que los relaten a nuestros hijos."
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Old January 03, 2016, 09:42 AM
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Great work.

Only: "La bella y la bestia" is the title in Spanish.
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Old January 04, 2016, 04:25 AM
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