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Looking for soulmate text
English my second language so let me know what i can improve about my wording.
Need to translate following into Spanish so it does not sound too offensive or out of line Quote:
Last edited by Roman; November 03, 2018 at 11:25 PM. |
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Decent, hard-working 34yo man, European, non-smoker/non-drinker,We are not a free translation service. We're a community of language learners. Welcome to the forums! I suppose you're interested in learning Spanish, else you wouldn't consider printing cards in Spanish hoping to incite a relationship with someone who can read the card. If you'd be willing to provide us with your own Spanish translation of the English text, we can point out where improvements can be made. |
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Just a few changes needed. "con un devoto, Mujer" needs no comma, no capitalization, and needs to use an adjective, instead of a noun, and it needs to agree in gender with a female it defines. ", 18-25" needs no comma and could use the preposition 'de'. "Si conoces" should be 'si se conoce'. "estar interesado" needs to agree in gender with a female. Last edited by Rusty; November 08, 2018 at 07:24 PM. |
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