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Old January 07, 2009, 06:27 PM
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Question A New Kitchen

I (S) am (LV) excited (SC) to see what my new kitchen will look like after it's complete. When we (S) moved (Va) to Pennsylvania (DO), it was hard to find a good house. When we finally found a house, Mom wasn't pleased with the kitchen. There were many things she wasn't pleased with, and I could remember her scolding Dad about these things, and how we could've chosen a better home. The kitchen was the main problem. Several months ago, Mom (S) decided (Va) we should get our house (IO) a new kitchen (DO). The same people who built a new bathroom and bedroom and also fixed up a bathroom were going to make our new kitchen. I (S) can't wait (V)! It is interesting and exciting to watch the workers make our new kitchen, by ripping out our wall, stove, and other things that should be taken away.


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Last edited by Jessica; January 07, 2009 at 06:35 PM.
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