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Skit Critique

Hi,
I am performing a skit for my Spanish class soon and would like some critique, suggestions etc. The unit is Ecology and my specific topic is global warming. It's supposed to last around 5-7 minutes. C and J stand for names.

Spanish:
J: Prefacio:
C es un organizador de Campañas Ambientales que trabaja para la organización de Global Acción Medio Ambiente (GEA). C paradas a hablar con un posible donador, J.

J: Hola C, ¿como estas?
C: Estoy bíen, gracias. ¿Y tu?
J: Bíen. Puedo yo tengo mas infomaccion sobre el calenmiento global antes de yo dono? Yo sabe es un muy importante tema.
C: Seguro! El calentamiento global es a aumento gradual de las temperaturas de la atmosfera y oceanos de la tierra. Es muy possible en cinco anos que la planeta (will be) insostenible a vivir en.
C: Clase, que saben ustedes de calentiemiento global?
J: Se que el calentamiento global es muy malo pero no sabe mucho mas.
C: Actualmente tenemos un planeta moribundo. El calenamiento global tiene muchas causas. Una causa es gases de efectos invernado. Segundo, cloroflurocarbanos. Ellos contribuyen a la destruccion de la capa de ozono. Finalmente, la actividad humana. Nosotros producir efectos toxico en la tierra. ¿Sabia usted que?
J: No, intersante! ¿Como nosotros afecta el calentamiento global como un poblacion?
C: Muchas cosas como ola de calor, huracanes, la lluvia acida y la sequia.
J: Yo no sabia. ¿Hay algo que las personas puedan a ayudar este problema horrible?
C: Si! Apagar la luz, la television y la computadora when (they aren't in use), comprar productos organicos y usar el transporte publico como el autobus, bicleta, o caminar. Ademas, recuerda el tres R's (erre): reducir, reusar y reciclar. Un resumen hay son muchos soluciones que (anyone) pueden. Que haces a reducir tu impacto, J?
J: Yo soy uso recargable baterias, cerrar el grifo cuando no la usas, y reciclar reciclabes. Hay son no fertilizantes danino en mi jardin y yo tambien plantar arboles. Gracias por tu consejo, yo intentare to usar (them) en el futuro.
J: Clase, ¿que haces a reducir tu impacto nuestro planeta?
C: Excelente! La organización de Global Acción Medio Ambiente (has been) trabajando desde 2008 a promover la educación de esta cuestión al público y crear conciencia.
J: Gracias por hablar con mi C! Yo realmente aprendí mucho sobre el calentamiento global. Voy a donar $500 dólares para el final de la semana.
J: Clase, ¿que tienen tu aprendar hoy sobre el calentamiento global? ¿Qué es un hecho importante?
C: ¡No problema, eres muy amable! Yo espero que en el futuro este problemo no existar. Siento que con la ayudamos de todos, esto se puede hacer.


English:
J: Preface: C is an Environmental Campaign organizer that works with the Global Environmental Action organization (GEA). C stops to speak with a potential donor, J.

J: Hello C, how are you?
C: I am good, thanks. And you?
J: Good. Can I have more information about global warming before I donate? I know it is a very important topic.
C: Sure! Global warming is the gradual rising of the atmospheric and ocean temperatures of the earth. It is very possible that in five years the planet will be unsustainable to live on.
C: Class, what do you know about global warming?
J: I know global warming is very bad but I don't know much else.
C: Actually we have a dying planet. Global warming has many causes. One cause is greenhouse gases. Secondly, CFC'S. They contribute to the destruction of the ozone. Finally, human activity. We produce toxic effects on the earth. Did you know that?
J: No, interesting! How does this affect us as a population?
C: Many things like heat waves, hurricanes, acid rain and drought.
J: I never knew. Is there anything that individuals can do to help this horrible problem?
C: Yes! Turn off the lights, television and the computer when they are not in use, buy organic products, and use public transportation like the bus, bicycle, or walk. Additionally remember the three R's: reduce, reuse, and recycle. In summary there are many solutions that anyone can do. What are you doing to reduce your impact, J?
J: I am using rechargeable batteries, turning off the faucet when not in use, and recycling recyclables. There are no harm/hurtful fertilizers in my garden and I also plant trees. Thanks for the tips, I will try to use them in the future.
J: Class, what do you to reduce your impact on our planet?
C: Excellent! The Global Environmental Action organization has been working since 2008 to promote the education of this issue to the public and create awareness.
J: Thanks for speaking with me C! I really learned a lot about global warming. I am going to donate $500 dollars by the end of the week.
J: Class, what have you learned today about global warming? What is one important fact?
C: No problem, you are very kind! I hope that in the future this problem will not exist. I feel that with everyone's help, this can be done.
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