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Please, check this sentence
Would you mind checking this sentence, please? Thanks in advance.
[Talking about them] ...to whom an abrupt turning point forces them to seek... |
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There's nothing wrong with the fragment.
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Thank you, Rusty.
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That's not a sentence. If you gave us the full sentence, it might be that "...whom an abrupt turning point forces to seek..." is better.
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OK.
His characters sense life, like Hemingway's veterans, to whom an abrupt turning point forces them to seek comfort... |
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I would write it this way: His characters sense life, like Hemingway's veterans, and seek comfort when faced with life's abrupt turning points
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His characters sense life, like Hemingway's veterans, whom an abrupt turning point forces to seek comfort... However, I think this would be more natural with the passive voice: His characters sense life, like Hemingway's veterans, who are forced by an abrupt turning point to seek comfort... * I'm sure someone has a counter-example! |
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