Correct?

[Jessica]

En mi dormitorio ideal, hay una television grande y cerca de la television hay un baño demasiado grande. También tengo una videocasetera cerca de la television. Hay una cocina cerca mi cama es grande y al otro lado del librero y el sillon de cuero. Hay una escalera que pasa atravez de un hueco. Mi cama esta siguiente al baño, ahi tengo una comoda cercano a la comoda hay un guardarropa, al igual hay una puerta en el techo de el closet ahi se encuentra la puerta del atico.

Crotalito actually posted this, and I just wanted to use his translations, but there are some errors because there should be periods.

[Rusty]

No, there are still problems. (The word you used for next is not the right one, for one example.) Unfortunately, Crotalito hasn't provided correct spelling or punctuation in all instances. Go back to your original post and look at what I questioned. See if you can come up with your own translation.

[CrOtALiTo]

Rusty, Why do you say? that my translate is in a wrong, please you explain me the parts of my own text where you have seen the mistakes.

[CrOtALiTo]

Who did removed my answer toward Jessica, last night I answered the post of Jessica, but anyway I don't see my post, Who did removed it?

[Tomisimo]

No posts have been removed from this thread. You must have replied to one of Jessica's other "dormitorio ideal" threads.