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Old May 19, 2009, 05:16 PM
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Does this paragraph make sense?

I had to write a paragraph about an object for show and tell for my spanish class, so I wrote about my bike.

Can someone please proofread this and tell me any errors/lines that don't make sense/wrong usage of verbs please. Thanks so so so much!

Mi bicicleta es una objecto que es muy importante a mi. Yo compré la bicicleta hace dos años para montar con mis amigos. Yo monto mi bicicleta cada día despues de la escuela. Yo pagué uno mil dolares para la bicicleta... Muy caro!! Cinco días despues yo lo compré yo monté cuarenta millas en la ciudad de New York. Fue fantastico! El año pasado yo chocé con un arbol pero yo no fue herido. Cuando yo estoy montando mi bicicleta yo soy muy contento. No me lastimo nunca en la bicicleta. Mi madre cree que yo soy loco para estoy pasando mucho tiempo con mi bicicleta, pero creo que no.
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