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Old August 10, 2008, 11:57 AM
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is this written correctly.....

mira a nuestras edades....no puedo creer que no me vees asi.
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Old August 10, 2008, 01:46 PM
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Hi, Hola, yea your text is more or less wrote, but you can use this phrase too.

Mira las edades que tenemos, y no puedo creer que no veas asi como yo quiero que me veas.
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Old August 10, 2008, 02:02 PM
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I suppose it's so:
"mira que edad tenemos.... no puedo creer que no me veas así"
"Look what age whe both have... I can't believe that you don't see me so."

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Old August 10, 2008, 03:30 PM
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Mira a nuestras edades... No puedo creer que no me veas así.
I understand that written correctly also include orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything more.
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Old August 10, 2008, 05:23 PM
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I understand that written correctly also includes orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything else.
I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...
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Old August 11, 2008, 01:03 PM
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I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...
Thanks a lot for your corrections. They are really clear.
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