Hello I´m new in the forums

[CrOtALiTo]

Aqui escribo unos ejemplos

I have learned it much this days

I want in order to learn the class at draw

Rosa hasn't got many cars

I feel that way,that, you have taught me well, only I want in order to know more words

I born in Mexico


It are some, examples, I can to said you, and want say you tanks, in really you have helped me much, with your correct at writting, I can learn that way want in order to a goal at hight learning, do you can teach me more things.?

Now, My brother are working, and he wont can teach me only to weekend, saturday and sunday, Now I have in order to practice alone, at that way, sometimes, I don't understand some words, and I don't want hope until sunday for my brother give me class.

Regards

I hope to don't have it much mistakes in my text.

I wait for your correct.

[Rusty]

Aqui escribo unos ejemplos

I have learned it much this days

I want in order to learn the class at draw

Rosa hasn't got many cars

I feel that way,that, you have taught me well, only I want in order to know more words

I born in Mexico

It are some, examples, I can to said you, and want say you tanks, in really you have helped me much, with your correct at writting, I can learn that way want in order to a goal at hight learning, do you can teach me more things.?

Now, My brother are working, and he wont can teach me only to weekend, saturday and sunday, Now I have in order to practice alone, at that way, sometimes, I don't understand some words, and I don't want hope until sunday for my brother give me class.

I hope to don't have it much mistakes in my text.

I wait for your correct.

Correcciones (Corrections)

I have learned it much this days
Si quieres decir He aprendido mucho estos días, se dice I have learned a lot these days, pero suena mejor si sustituyes 'these last few days' o 'lately' por 'these days'.
Creo que te sobra una palabra (it).
this day = hoy en día (hoy)
today = hoy
these last few days = estos últimos días

I want in order to learn the class at draw
Quiero aprender se dice I want to learn.
No entiendo lo demás. Escribe la frase en español, por favor, y te la traduciré.

Rosa hasn't got many cars. :good::)
Also: Rosa doesn't have many cars.

I feel that way,that, you have taught me well,
Siento que me has enseñado bien se dice I feel that you have taught me well.
No sé por qué escribiste 'that way, that'. Escribe lo que querías decir en español, por favor.

only I want in order to know more words
Sólo quiero saber más palabras se dice I only want to know more words.

I born in Mexico
Nací en México is said I was born in Mexico. The verb nacer is translated to be born. It's a compound verb in English, and you only conjugate the first part of the verb - I was born, he was born, they were born, etc.

It are some, examples, I can to said you,
Estos son algunos ejemplos que puedo decirte is said These are some examples I can say to you.

and want say you tanks,
Y quiero decirte gracias is said And I want to say thank you. You can also say And I want to say thanks.

in really you have helped me much, with your correct at writting,
En verdad, me has ayudado mucho con las correcciones escritas is said Really, you have helped me a lot with your written corrections.

I can learn that way want in order to a goal at hight learning,
No entiendo lo que querías decir. (I don't understand what you were trying to say.) Escribe la frase en español, por favor. (Write the sentence in Spanish, please.)

do you can teach me more things.?
¿Me puedes enseñar más cosas?
Can you teach me more things?

Now, My brother are working, and he wont can teach me only to weekend, saturday and sunday,
Ahora, mi hermano trabaja, y no podrá enseñarme hasta el fin de semana, el sábado y el domingo.
Now, my brother is working, and he won’t be able to teach me until the weekend, Saturday and Sunday.

Now I have in order to practice alone,
Ahora tengo que practicar solo.
Now I have to practice alone.

at that way,
y así,
and that way,

sometimes, I don't understand some words, and I don't want :good::)
to wait until Sunday for my brother to give me a class.

I hope to don't have it much mistakes in my text.
Espero que no tenga muchos errores en mi texto.
I hope I don’t have many mistakes in my text.

I wait for your correct.
Espero tus correcciones.
I await your corrections. -or-
I’m waiting for your corrections.

[Tomisimo]

I have learned it much this days
I have learned a lot these days.

Aunque existe la palabra "much", debes usar "a lot" para decir "mucho".
"this" es singular, y "these" es plural:this day = este día
these days = estos días
I want in order to learn the class at draw
No estoy seguro qué quieres decir con esta frase. Literalmente, has dicho:
I want in order to learn the class at draw
quiero para aprender la clase al dibujar


Rosa hasn't got many cars :good:
Rosa no tiene muchos coches.
Muy bien. :)

I feel that way,that, you have taught me well, only I want in order to know more words
De nuevo, no estoy del todo seguro de qué quieres decir aquí, pero aquí te va un ejemplo:I feel that you have taught me well, but I still want to learn more words.
Siento que me has enseñado bien, pero aún quiero aprender más palabras.
I born in Mexico
Aquí te faltó una sola palabra. Debe ser:I was born in Mexico.
En inglés, no existe el verbo nacer, en su lugar se usa to be born, o ser nacido. Literalmente esta frase sería: Fui nacido en Mexico en lugar de nací en México.

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Veo que Rusty ya me ganó y corrigió todo, así que ya no continuaré, pero dejaré las correcciones que ya había hecho. :) Gracias Rusty

[CrOtALiTo]

MMM

So, I'm some confuse, but, I believe that somethings is different to the Spanish, still I cannot to know all about the words existent, but, I can get well promt, I know that is not easy this language, of the same way that you try to learn Spanish, these for me is some difficult, you have said me some new words, but, I have tougth that with these last few days, I writing somethings in the forums, and you correting me, I can to try of studying other ways at speak, there is some that I would like do is speak with somebody.

I await your corrections

Thank you very much.

If somebody want to speak with me, please just tell me, and, I can to add you as quicky as possible.

While, I will be awaiting your corrections.

Aslo, I used to use some traslation of software.

I might tomorrow, I going to teach some words in Spanish.

[CrOtALiTo]

I'm sorry, I have correted my own text. so

MMM

So, I'm some confuse, but, I believe that somethings is different to the Spanish, still I cannot to know all about the words existent, but, I can get well promt, I know that is not easy this language, of the same way that you try to learn Spanish, these for me is some difficult, you have said me some new words, but, I have tougth that with the these last few days, I have learned very a fiu words but new words for me, I believe that writing somethings in the forums, and you correting me, I can to try of studying other ways at speak, there is some that I would like do is speak with somebody English

I await your corrections

Thank you very much.

If somebody want to speak with me, please just tell me, and, I can to add you as quicky as possible.

While, I will be awaiting your corrections.

Aslo, I used to use some traslation of software.

I might tomorrow, I going to teach some words in Spanish.


ANIMOS GENTE BONITA PRONTO PODREMOS HABLAR Y ESCRIBIR MEJOR QUE ANTES USTEDES SOLO AGUARDEN, SEAMOS DESESPERADOS CHAMACOS.
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[Rusty]

Respecto a lo de hablar con alguien, sugiero que te contactes con alguien por allí donde vives que sabe el inglés. Sería una buena idea que hablaras con esa persona. También puedes escuchar música inglesa para mejorar la pronunciación entre visitas con aquella persona.

As far as speaking with someone, I suggest you find someone nearby that knows English. It would be a good idea to speak with that person. You can also listen to English music to improve your pronunciation between visits with that person.

Mientras tanto, ¿nos harás el favor de escribir en ambos idiomas? Así podemos dar con el sentido inmediatamente y podemos ofrecerte la mejor manera de decir lo que quieres aprender.

Meanwhile, will you do us the favor of writing in both languages? That way we can get the right meaning immediately and can offer you the best way to say what you want to learn.

[CrOtALiTo]

Sure man, Can Rusty correct me, in my last text, 'cuse I saw now that you have correct me, I want to know if my last text is well.

Regards.

[Rusty]

I'm sorry, I have corrected my own text.

... (ve abajo - see below)

I await your corrections. :good: :)

Thank you very much. :good:

If somebody wants to speak with me, please just tell me, and I can :bad: add you as quickly as possible.

Meanwhile, I will be awaiting your corrections.

Also, I used to use :bad: translation :bad: software.

I might tomorrow. :good: (No te ayudará mucho. Por lo general, no existe una traducción automática que te sirva bien. ¡No te rindas!)


So, I'm some confuse
Bueno, estoy algo confundido
So, I'm somewhat confused
So, I'm a little confused

but, I believe that somethings is different to the Spanish,
pero, creo que :?:(no puedo entender qué querías decir)

still I cannot to know all about the words existent, but, I can get well promt,
aún no puedo saber todo acerca de las palabras existentes, pero puedo :?:

I know that is not easy this language
Sé que no es fácil esta lengua
I know (that) this language is not easy

of the same way that you try to learn Spanish, these for me is some difficult,
de la misma manera que (tal como) intentas aprender el español, esto para mí es algo dificil
just like you trying to learn Spanish, this is somewhat difficult for me

you have said me some new words,
me has dicho algunas palabras nuevas
you have told me some new words
mejor: you have taught me ...

but, I have tougth that with the these last few days,
pero, he pensado que, en estos últimos días,
but, I have thought, in the last few days,
mejor: but, I think, ...

I have learned very a fiu words but new words for me
he aprendido muy pocas palabras, pero nuevas palabras para mí
I have learned very few words, but new words for me

I believe that writing somethings in the forums, and you correcting me, I can to try of studying other ways at speak,
:?: (many things are possible, please write this sentence in both languages)
something = algo, alguna cosa
some things = algunas cosas

there is some that I would like do is speak with somebody English
Algo que me gustaría hacer es hablar con alguien en inglés.
Something I would like to do is to speak with somebody in English.
Something (that) I would like to do is to speak English with somebody/someone.
There is something (that) I would like to do - speak English with somebody/someone.

[Iris]

Welcome. It should be forbidden to be 24, you make me feel ancient in comparison.:D

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, I hope that all you to be well.
Hola, Espero que todos esten bien.

Today, I want narrate about at my City.
Now here in my City there are a lot of warm, here the people is very moved, because at like way, all the places is near, in Carmen City, there are many beachs, at least during the weekends, the majority of the people going to swiming, and like the children, here in my City there are days at holiday.

In Carmen City, the people working in companies, as pemex, here the life is most expensive, good, now I going to say about me.

Firts. My name is Jorge Luis Arjona.
Second. I have 24 old years
Third. I have two children.
Fourth. I am Married.
Fifth. I like to English

Later, I can show some picture of my City, I hope that hastn't got a lot of mistakes my narrate.

I await your corrections

So, I will be there days, writing it and learning all your corrections.

I have learned it a few of things.

Regards.

[poli]

Hi, I hope that all you to be well.
Hola, Espero que todos esten bien.

Today, I want narrate about at my City.
Today, I want to tell you about my city
Now here in my City there are a lot of warm, here the people is very
It's warm now in the city, and there are many people walking around,
moved, because at like way, all the places is near, in Carmen City, there
because all places are nearby in Carmen City.
are many beachs, at least during the weekends, the majority of the
There are many beaches, and at least on weekends, the majority of the
people going to swiming, and like the children, here in my City there are
people go swimming . We have holidays here in my city.
days at holiday.





















In Carmen City, the people working in companies, as pemex, here the life is most expensive, good, now I going to say about me.
Here in Carmen City a lot of people work in big companies like Pemex. Here
the life is expensive and good. Now I'm going to tell you about me
First. My name is Jorge Luis Arjona.
Second. I have 24 old years(I'm 24 years old)
Third. I have two children.
Fourth. I am Married.
Fifth. I like to English((I like to speak English)

Later, I can show some picture of my City, I hope that hastn't got a lot of mistakes my narrate.
Later, I'll show you some pictures of my city. I hope I haven't made a lot of mistakes in what I wrote
I await your corrections

So, I will be there days, writing it and learning all your corrections.
So, I will spend days writing and learning from you corrections
I have learned it a few of things.
I have learned a few things
Regards.
I look forward to seeing pictures of Carmen City. Is Carmen City on the
East Coast?

[CrOtALiTo]

Oye una pregunta a poco todo lo que escribo esta muy mal.?

[CrOtALiTo]

Not man,

Carmen City is on Mexico, is coast.

Please, you answer me.

Can you tell me if my text all is bad wrote?

[poli]

Not man,

Carmen City is on Mexico, is coast.
Carmen City is on the Mexican coast
Please, you answer me.

Can you tell me if my text all is bad wrote?
Can you tell me if my text is badly written?

En Inglés tenemos el dicho Rome wasn't built in a day
Significa que Roma no fue construido en un día. Te entiendo
Jorge, pero lo que escribe está chapurreado. Con práctica
mejorás. Haz caso de las correciones.Come dijo Rusty,es una buena idea eschuchar las canciones en ingles y tratas de buscar las letras de las canciones en el internet. La mayoría están disponibles. Las canciones en inglés de antaño son excelentes para aprender inglés. El cantante principal es Frank Sinatra porque canta muy claro y la letra de sus canciones hacen sentido.
Que sigue estudiando.
sentido

[Rusty]

Hi, I hope that all you to be well.
Hola, Espero que todos esten bien.

Today, I want narrate about at my City.
Now here in my City there are a lot of warm, here the people is very moved, because at like way, all the places is near, in Carmen City, there are many beachs, at least during the weekends, the majority of the people going to swiming, and like the children, here in my City there are days at holiday.

In Carmen City, the people working in companies, as pemex, here the life is most expensive, good, now I going to say about me.

Firts. My name is Jorge Luis Arjona.
Second. I have 24 old years
Third. I have two children.
Fourth. I am Married.
Fifth. I like to English

Later, I can show some picture of my City, I hope that hastn't got a lot of mistakes my narrate.

I await your corrections

So, I will be there days, writing it and learning all your corrections.

I have learned it a few of things.

Regards.

Hi, I hope that all you to be well.
Hola, Espero que todos esten bien.
Hi, I hope you all are well.
Hi, I hope you're all well.
Hi, I hope all of you are well.
More common:
Espero que todo les vaya bien.
I hope all is going well (for you).
I hope (you) all are doing well.


Today, I want narrate about at my City.
Now here in my City there are a lot of warm,
here the people is very moved,
because at like way,
all the places is near,
in Carmen City, there are many beachs,
at least during the weekends, the majority of the people going to swiming,
and like the children,
here in my City there are
days at holiday.

In Carmen City, the people working in companies, as pemex,
here the life is most expensive,
Today, I want to talk about at my city.
Now Here in my city there is a lot of warmth.
Here the people are always on the go
:?:(for that reason - because of the warmth).
Everything is nearby.
In Carmen City, there are many beaches.
at least During the weekends, the majority of the people going to swimming,
:?:(even the children).
Here in my city there are
:?:(many holidays).

In Carmen City, the people working in companies, like PEMEX.
Here the life is very expensive.


good, now I going to say about me.

Firts. My name is Jorge Luis Arjona.
Second. I have 24 old years
Third. I have two children.
Fourth. I am Married.
Fifth. I like to English
good, Now I'm going to talk about myself.

First. My name is Jorge Luis Arjona.
Second. I am 24 years old.
Third. I have two children.
Fourth. I am married.
Fifth. I like to English.

Later, I can show some picture of my City,
Later, I can show you some pictures of my city.

I hope that hastn't got a lot of mistakes my narrate.
I hope my story hasn't got a lot of mistakes.

I await your corrections.

So, I will be here for days, writing it and learning from all your corrections.

I have learned it a few of things.


Pretty good effort. :) ¡Ojo la puntuación!

Please include both languages in your writings so that others can learn both versions of your stories a la misma vez. ;)

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, my friends.

I hope you all are well.

Can you talk me, whatsome about yourself.

I´m going to just find pictures above my city.

Just I was thinking in, I talking you story of Mexican.

May I talking you storys?, here in the forums.

You have corrected me, pretty good, you continue correcting me, bye

[Rusty]

Hi, my friends. :good:

I hope you all are well. :good:

Can you talk me, whatsome about yourself.

I´m going to just find pictures about my city.

Just I was thinking in, I talking you story of Mexican. :?: No tengo ni idea que querías decir. Escribe tanto en inglés como en español, por favor.

May I talking you storys?, here in the forums.

You have corrected me, pretty good, you continue correcting me, bye

Can you talk me, whatsome about yourself.
Can you tell me something about yourself?
Can you tell me a little about yourself?
Can you tell me some things about yourself?
Can you tell me somewhat about yourself?

May I talking you storys?, here in the forums.
May I tell you stories here in the forums?

You have corrected me, pretty good,
You have corrected me pretty well.

you continue correcting me, bye
Continue correcting me (, please). Bye.