Grammar mistakes in the following text?

[Caramelita]

Hiya!


Just made up a little text with lot's of grammar to see if I could translate it correctly, could someone please let me know if I have any mistakes? :)


In English it goes like that : I have noticed that he still hasn't taken the garbage out neither did his home chores even though I asked him two hours ago to take the garbage out and do his home chores.
Then I went to remind him about those things and told him " now you can not go out with your friends before you do your chores".



And the Spanish :


Me he dado cuenta de que todavía no haya sacado la basura ni ha hecho sus quehaceres en casa aunque hace dos horas le pedí que sacara la basura y hiciera los quehaceres en casa.
Entonces fui a recordarle de estas cosas y le dije : “ ahora no puedes salir con tus amigos antes de que hagas tus deberes”.




I'm not sure if the english text makes a lot of sence but I hope it does :D

[Rusty]

Hi ya!

Just made up a little text with lots of grammar to see if I could translate it correctly. Could someone please let me know if I have any mistakes? :)

In English, it goes like this: I have noticed that he still hasn't taken the garbage out or done his home chores, even though I asked him two hours ago to take the garbage out and do his home chores.
Then I went to remind him about those things and told him, "Now you can't go out with your friends before you do your chores".

And the Spanish:

Me he dado cuenta de que todavía no haya (wrong mood) sacado la basura ni ha hecho sus quehaceres en (wrong word) casa aunque hace dos horas le pedí que sacara la basura y hiciera los quehaceres en casa.
Entonces fui a recordarle de estas cosas y le dije, “Ahora no puedes salir con tus amigos antes de que hagas tus deberes”.

I'm not sure if the E/COLOR]nglish text makes a lot of sen[COLOR="red"]se, but I hope it does. :DI corrected the English errors outright and marked where errors can be found in the Spanish version.

[Caramelita]

I corrected the English errors outright and marked where errors can be found in the Spanish version.


Thank you for your help !!!!:)

Would this be correct? :

Me he dado cuenta de que todavía no ha sacado la basura ni ha hecho sus quehaceres de casa casa aunque hace dos horas le pedí que sacara la basura e hiciera los quehaceres de casa.
Entonces fui a recordarle de esas cosas y le dije, “Ahora no puedes salir con tus amigos antes de que hagas tus deberes”.

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

Yes, it's correct now. :)

[Caramelita]

Yes, it's correct now. :)


Thank you so much for your help :)