is this written correctly.....

[hola]

mira a nuestras edades....no puedo creer que no me vees asi.

[CrOtALiTo]

Hi, Hola, yea your text is more or less wrote, but you can use this phrase too.

Mira las edades que tenemos, y no puedo creer que no veas asi como yo quiero que me veas.

[sosia]

I suppose it's so:
"mira que edad tenemos.... no puedo creer que no me veas así"
"Look what age whe both have... I can't believe that you don't see me so."

saludos :D

[Alfonso]

Mira a nuestras edades... No puedo creer que no me veas así.I understand that written correctly also include orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything more.

[María José]

I understand that written correctly also includes orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything else.
I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...;)

[Alfonso]

I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...;)Thanks a lot for your corrections. They are really clear.