Spanish Homework - Essay (70 words)

[Faust0222]

Hello, could you please check if I have correct spelling in my homework?

-Cuando abacado la escuela, espero que consigo en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor. Ojala que estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy a Canadá y tiene pequeňo casa en montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la vida tranquilo y largo. Quiero tener mi propía pub. Deseo que lago en mi jardín. Espero que tener mucho dinero y feliz vida.-

I am really bad at spanish language at school because our teacher is really bad at explaining things but I am tring my best to speak at least a bit good. She gave us homework to write a short essay (70 words) on what we want to do in our life. I have to use phrases "Qué + subjuntivo; Ojala; Espero; Quiero; Deseo". Big thanks if you can help. :)

[Rusty]

I've marked misspelled words here.Cuando abacado la escuela, espero que consigo en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor. Ojala que estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy a Canadá y tiene pequeňo casa en montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la vida tranquilo y largo. Quiero tener mi propía pub. Deseo que lago en mi jardín. Espero que tener mucho dinero y feliz vida.
The spelling errors are the least of your worries. There are many grammatical errors.

[Faust0222]

Thank you! Sorry to annoy you but could you help me also with that gramatical mistakes? I hoped at least my grammar is fine :/

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

If the objective was to use the subjunctive, you need to review your lessons and conjugation; you aren't conjugating in subjunctive at all (!) and in many constructions you didn't even include the needed verbs for expressing wishes.
Also, check your dictionary; vocabulary, gender and spelling mistakes (including those that have been already signaled) are marked in green.


-Cuando abacado (Be careful, this is not Spanish, and the verb should be conjugated; you're only writing a participle) la escuela, espero que consigo (wrong conjugation; this is present and you need a subjunctive; plus, you also need what you want to get) en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor (This is expresing a wish, but you don't say for whom). Ojala que *** (Article missing here) estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy (Wrong construction, check your subjunctives) a Canadá y tiene (Wrong person and conjugation) pequeňo casa (Wrong gender agreement and be careful: "ň" is not ñ) en *** (Article missing here) montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero *** (Verb or article missing here) esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la (Indefinite article instead) vida tranquilo y largo (Check gender agreement). Quiero tener mi propía pub (Check either vocabulary or gender agreement). Deseo que lago en mi jardín (This is fragmentary. You need a conjugated verb to make sense). Espero que tener mucho dinero y *** (Article missing here) feliz vida.-

[Faust0222]

Thanks for all your help, I remade it and I will let you know what mark did I get for it :)