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[Xinfu]

Are my sentences correct?

-These are editings I've done on the book. For example, on page 8, 'in' should be 'it'. It's a typographical error.

-These are editings I've done of the book. For example, on page 8, 'in' should be 'it'. It's a typographical error.

[wrholt]

Are my sentences correct?

-These are editings I've done on the book. For example, on page 8, 'in' should be 'it'. It's a typographical error.

-These are editings I've done of the book. For example, on page 8, 'in' should be 'it'. It's a typographical error.

These are edits I've done on the book.
These are edits I've done for the book.

"Editing" is the process of reviewing a text and making changes to it. Individual changes to a text are "edits". In this context you can also say "corrections" or "changes".

Both "on" and "for" are correct in this context. "Of" is not correct in this context.

[Xinfu]

Thank you.

[Rusty]

You can also substitute 'made' for 'done'.

These are (the) edits I've made in ...

I would use 'in the book' instead of 'on' if the book is published/printed and 'on' if the book is being proofed (prior to printing).

[Xinfu]

Thank you.