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When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped

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ROBINDESBOIS
March 07, 2015, 09:37 AM
1. When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped, she took a gun and wander about the streets to find who hold captivated her own flesh and blood.
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Rusty
March 07, 2015, 10:58 AM
When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped, she took a gun and wandered about the streets to find who held captivated her own flesh and blood.Corrected.
It can also read, "... to find who held her own flesh and blood captive."