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shushu
June 15, 2015, 04:50 PM
Have I answered these correctly according to the tense used. Please let me know where I need to make corrections and why. Thank you so much in advance!!

*( Present tense ) Discuss your preferences geographical and landscape-wise when traveling. ( Do you prefer to travel to the mountains or go to the coast ? Why?What kind of weather you like? tropical, cold or wet ? What kind of landscape you prefer? )

Answer:

Yo Prefiero ir a la costa porque me prefiero las playas. Me gusta ir de vacaciones en junio porque me gusta el tiempo. Hace sol y hace calor. También tengo yo hijos tienen vacaciones escolares. Yo y mis hijos gustamos jugaba en las playas y el océano.

*Would you like the desert?

Answer:

Si gusta a el desierto. Siempre he querido visitar donde el desierto se encuentra con el océano.


*( Present Perfect Tense ) Name five activities you have never done and explain why it has not done. Give different reasons ; no reason to use it all .

1. Nunca he hecho paracaidismo porque me da mucho miedo.

2. Nunca he ido a acampando. he tenido la opurtunidad de acampar, pero me encantaria creo que seria algo asombroso y espero poder hecho un día.

3. Nunca he ido de vacaciones a solas. Cuando era más joven yo no tenía permiso y ahora no puedo dejo a mis hijos.

4. Nunca he ido siempre han querido ver la aurora boreal, pero no he podido porque el mejor lugar para verlos es Noruega y Finlandia.

5. Nunca he ido de vacaciones con mis mejores amigos porque nunca he tenido la oportunidad.

shushu
June 16, 2015, 12:15 AM
If anyone can provide some/any feedback I would appreciate it. I am hoping to hear from someone before I submit it😁 even if you can't give specifics, saying it isn't correct so I can continue working on it would help too! 😥😥😥 really nervous about it.

Thank you in advance!!

Rusty
June 16, 2015, 05:41 AM
When you use the auxiliary verb poder, it gets conjugated. The main verb, however, remains in the infinitive form-fix phrases like 'puedo dejo'.

You correctly used 'me gusta' (it is pleasing to me) once, but didn't follow the same pattern in other spots.

You have used words like acampando, which are gerundios, where an infinitive should have been used instead, which acts as a noun (and is the equivalent to the English gerund, which may look like a verb but is always a noun).

There is something missing in this phrase and the subject changed, but should not have:
Nunca he ido siempre han querido

You need to watch noun and pronoun agreement. For example, ver la aurora boreal and verlos.

There are several issues in this phrase:
he tenido la opurtunidad de acampar, pero me encantaria creo que seria algo asombroso y espero poder hecho un día.
1. No capital letter on the first word.
2. I believe you meant to start the sentence with 'no'.
3. Opurtunidad is misspelled.
4. Encantaria is misspelled.
5. Missing punctuation after encantaria.
6. After poder, hecho should take another form.

There are other errors, but I've run out of time.

shushu
June 16, 2015, 04:19 PM
Thank you for taking the time to respond! I appreciate it.

shushu
June 20, 2015, 12:05 AM
Thank you for all your help! I made the corrections and got a 45/50 in my final ��!

Rusty
June 20, 2015, 05:49 AM
You're welcome. I'm happy to hear that you did so well!