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[ROBINDESBOIS]

Gender equality is a controversial topic. On the international women’s day, there were marches all over the world where women demanded more equality between them and men. A general strike was called by the Unions to show the world their discontent.

[Rusty]

Mostly good!Gender equality is a controversial topic. On the International Women’s Day, there were marches all over the world where women demanded more equality between themselves and men. A general strike was called by the unions to show the world their discontent.