For jchen

[cmon]

The saga of your sad vacation story is heartbreaking.
La saga de tu historia de vacaciones tristes es desgarradora.

Why not make it more colorful/exciting? In other words, lie about it.
Por qué no hacerla más colorida/lleno de color/hacerla más apasionante.
En (de?) otras palabras, mentir.
Como se de se, lie about it?

Create your own personal fantasy vacation.
Puedes producir tu propio vacaciones de fantasía personal.

The teacher probably won't care, you might even get points for being creative.
Es probable que la maestra no le importe y saques buenos puntos por siendo creativa.

Even if you don't have fun during your real vacation, you can still have fun in your head!
Aunque, no te diviertas durante tu(s)? vacaciones verdadero(s)?. aún puedes encontrar la diversión en tu mente./todavía puedes divertirte en el mente!

Please someone check my sentences

[Jessica]

huh why it says for jchen?
as I supposed to fix it...?

[cmon]

No, I was just offering an alternate storyline for your winter vacation paper. Tongue in cheek, mostly.

[Jessica]

oh ok lol! ^_^ :lol:

[Rusty]

The saga of your sad vacation story is heartbreaking.
Es desgarradora la saga de tu historia triste (acerca) de las vacaciones.

Why not make it more colorful/exciting? In other words, lie about it.
¿Por qué no hacerla más colorida/llena de color/apasionada?
Es decir, mentir.
¿Cómo se dice lie about it? (mentir sobre algo)

Create your own personal fantasy vacation.
Crea tu propia vacación de fantasía.

The teacher probably won't care, you might even get points for being creative.
Es probable que la maestra no le importe y puede que saques buenos puntos por ser creativa.

Even if you don't have fun during your real vacation, you can still have fun in your head!
Incluso si no te diviertas durante las vacaciones verdaderas, ¡aún puedes imaginarlo!


Suggested changes above.

[cmon]

Is aunque more for use in subjunctive sentences?
Maybe using that more in english would help me remember to use que.
thanks for your fixes

[Rusty]

Is aunque more for use in subjunctive sentences?
Maybe using that more in english would help me remember to use que.
thanks for your fixes
It may be that aunque and incluso si are synonymous, but I didn't think so at the time. Now, there're looking like the same thing to me.
Depending on what follows, the indicative or the subjunctive may be used.