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María José
August 27, 2009, 04:39 PM
Good point. :good:
ookami
August 27, 2009, 08:12 PM
Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.

Claro, y lo que importa para un Haiku son las silabas fonéticas y no las escritas. (en japones casi siempre se corresponden, por eso es más facil en ese sentido)

Yo no lo sabía eso, me lo dijo un amigo que entiende mucho del tema. No es nada facil ni para nativos darse cuenta de las silabas habladas sino tenes practica.

PD: todos los haikus que se me ocurren tienen diferentes silabas escritas que habladas..
CrOtALiTo
August 27, 2009, 09:50 PM
sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die


The roses are more pretty if are like you, it was the sweet poem in my hart, but the my hard is not compared with your beautifil eyes.:D


Just it was a thinking.
sosia
August 28, 2009, 07:04 AM
sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die

como la rosa
el amor nace, crece,
desaparece.

El diamante
es aburrido, soso
aunque eterno

Saludos :D
AngelicaDeAlquezar
August 28, 2009, 10:51 AM
@ookami: Estoy de acuerdo en que los recursos retóricos (y más en la poesía) son prácticamente infinitos, pero considerando que muchos de los usuarios del foro son estudiantes de español, había que hacer la aclaración sobre las sílabas, para evitar confusiones. :)
Jessica
August 28, 2009, 03:26 PM
one, two, three, four, five
in an hour I will dive
into the Dead Sea
EmpanadaRica
September 13, 2009, 03:59 PM
Can hearts be broken
that never really healed well
in the second place?

Your lips and hands cold,
Did I just imagine this-
No...you kissed and told..

Magic mirrors may
make me fear,frown, flee, fly-
cry a crooked day

Bag of bones, stripped of
flesh and flaw, fear and fright might
atone my heart's plight.
ookami
September 13, 2009, 04:50 PM
En esta noche
la rica empanada -----------> de jamón y quezo
me acompaña.
EmpanadaRica
September 13, 2009, 05:07 PM
En esta noche
la rica empanada -----------> de jamón y quezo
me acompaña.

:lol: ¡Qué bien! :D :thumbsup:
Jessica
September 13, 2009, 05:25 PM
Can hearts be broken
that never really healed well
in the second place?

Your lips and hands cold,
Did I just imagine this-
No...you kissed and told..

Magic mirrors may
make me fear,frown, flee, fly-
cry a crooked day

Bag of bones, stripped of
flesh and flaw, fear and fright might
atone my heart's plight.



:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:
Jessica
October 11, 2009, 03:49 PM
Five syllables here.
Then, seven syllables here.
Finish with five more.
ookami
October 13, 2009, 03:35 PM
In a cold april night
behind the mountain
the flames have started.
Jessica
October 17, 2009, 01:25 PM
Good one :)
hermit
October 17, 2009, 01:42 PM
the flames have started
northern lights are shimmering
unseen force at play!
Jessica
October 18, 2009, 03:50 PM
^ that's a good one too
Cloudgazer
October 22, 2009, 04:55 PM
Five syllables here.
Then, seven syllables here.
Finish with five more.
Ya tengo la oportunidad de usar una nueva palabra, gracias a Chileno...

¡Qué ocurrente, Jessica!
Jessica
October 23, 2009, 10:52 AM
Huh? :confused:
Cloudgazer
October 24, 2009, 12:10 AM
Your haiku is very clever, Jessica :)
Jessica
October 24, 2009, 07:07 AM
oh thank you! :)