I chose you... please check.

[ItsThaMonsta]

What I am saying is "I want you to know that I chose you over a pretty girl who wanted me to come to Puerto Rico. For any part that is wrong please explain. Gracias!

Quiero que sepas que te eligí en lugar de una muchacha muy bonita que querido que me venga a Puerto Rico.

[Perikles]

Off-topic, but this suggests that you are talking to somebody who you don't think is pretty. Not a good idea. :whistling:

[ItsThaMonsta]

Off-topic, but this suggests that you are talking to somebody who you don't think is pretty. Not a good idea. :whistling:

Jajajaja... Es bueno. Es por una muchacha vieja mio.

[poli]

What I am saying is "I want you to know that I chose you over a pretty girl who wanted me to come to Puerto Rico. For any part that is wrong please explain. Gracias!

Quiero que sepas que te eligí (escogí) en lugar de una muchacha muy bonita que quería que yo la acompaña a un viaje a Puerto Rico.
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[ItsThaMonsta]

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I think that you are changing what I am actually saying towards the end. The girl is in Puerto Rico now and she wants me to come there to see her.

[irmamar]

What I am saying is "I want you to know that I chose you over a pretty girl who wanted me to come to Puerto Rico. For any part that is wrong please explain. Gracias!

Quiero que sepas que te eligí en lugar de una muchacha muy bonita que querido que me venga a Puerto Rico.

Quiero que sepas que te elegí a ti en lugar de a una muchacha muy bonita que quería que fuera a Puerto Rico (why "come" instead of "go"? :thinking: )

Though I'd say:

Quiero que sepas que te elegí a ti en lugar de a una muchacha, casi tan bonita como tú, que quería que fuera a P. R.

Y así quedas como un señor.

;) :D