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Jessica
April 15, 2010, 06:17 AM
Mother Earth by Jessica Chen

If we keep polluting
Mother Earth will die
She is dying
From all our pollutants
We need to find a solution
For cleaner air
Cleaner water
Save endangered animals
Stop littering
Mother Earth is dying
Help save her
For she is our Mother Earth
Our home
So please
Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle.

CrOtALiTo
April 15, 2010, 10:22 AM
It was very nice.

Where did you get that poem?

irmamar
April 15, 2010, 10:24 AM
It's a Jessica's poem, she wrote it.

Congratulations, Jessica. :applause: :)

Jessica
April 15, 2010, 10:25 AM
I wrote it myself. we are doing this First draft thing where you can submit your poems, short stories, drawings etc and it's all due tomorrow. I wanted to do one so I can get extra credit, so this came out of thin air. I just made it up :rolleyes:

It's a Jessica's poem, she wrote it.

Congratulations, Jessica. :applause: :)

gracias :) and I made a little correction ;)

irmamar
April 15, 2010, 10:26 AM
What does "come out of thin air" mean? :thinking:

Jessica
April 15, 2010, 10:28 AM
The idea for my poem came out of nowhere, I just suddenly thought it up

and it pretty much means

without warning
Synonyms: out of nothing (http://www.answers.com/topic/out-of-nothing), from nowhere (http://www.answers.com/topic/from-nowhere)

CrOtALiTo
April 15, 2010, 10:28 AM
I wrote it myself. we are doing this First draft thing where you can submit your poems, short stories, drawings etc and it's all due tomorrow. I wanted to do one so I can get extra credit, so this came out of thin air. I just made it up :rolleyes:



gracias :) and I made a little correction ;)

Then Felicidades.

Then congratulation your poem was a great successful.

Jessica
April 15, 2010, 10:30 AM
Thank you

it's just going to be part of a booklet full of poems and drawings and short stories; it's not really a contest.

irmamar
April 15, 2010, 10:33 AM
Thanks, Jessica. :)

You can ask Bob for if he wants to give you one of his drawings. ;) :)

Jessica
April 15, 2010, 10:34 AM
ha ha that would be nice but it has to be our own work. If only I was a really good drawer maybe I could also submit a drawing

irmamar
April 15, 2010, 10:41 AM
Well, you can try. ;)

CrOtALiTo
April 15, 2010, 01:34 PM
Yes it could be good point, you could to practice more the poems in spoken and written in Spanish, I believe that it could be a great opportunity.

Jessica
April 15, 2010, 02:01 PM
Well, you can try. ;)

no I am horrible at drawing I don't even know what to draw. I'm better at writing believe me :rolleyes:

Yes it could be good point, you could to practice more the poems in spoken and written in Spanish, I believe that it could be a great opportunity.

oh yes last year there were poems written in different languages, French, and Spanish I think and I'm not sure if there were any more but Spanish was one