Feedback Needed

[funkcanna]

Hi, I am currently trying to write as much as I can in Spanish and feedback is invaluable. I am just wondering if anyone can provide feedback on the below paragraph. Any help is appreciated!

Hace un tiempo, mi esposa y yo quedamos en un hotel muy bonito llamado "The Shangri-la" en Abu Dhabi, donde vivimos. Disfrutamos el restaurante y la playa. Tambíen ordenamos el servicio de habitaciones y bebimos muy mucho! Lo pasamos bien. A menudos ir a los hoteles en Abu Dhabi para relajarse.

I wanted to say:
Some time ago, my wife and I stayed in a very nice hotel called "The Shangri-la" in Abu Dhabi, where we live. We enjoyed the restaurant and the beach. We also ordered room service and we drank too much! We had a good time. We often go to hotels in Abu Dhabi to relax.

Thanks in advance to anyone who can assist :)

[poli]

Hi, I am currently trying to write as much as I can in Spanish and feedback is invaluable. I am just wondering if anyone can provide feedback on the below paragraph. Any help is appreciated!

Hace un tiempo, mi esposa y yo quedamos en un hotel muy bonito llamado "The Shangri-la" en Abu Dhabi, donde vivimos. Disfrutamos el restaurante y la playa. Tambíen ordenamos tragos del servicio de habitaciones bebimos :bad:muy:bad: mucho! Lo pasamos bien. A menudo (or De vez en cuando) vamos a los hoteles de Abu Dhabi para relajarnos.

I wanted to say:
Some time ago, my wife and I stayed in a very nice hotel called "The Shangri-la" in Abu Dhabi, where we live. We enjoyed the restaurant and the beach. We also ordered room service and we drank too much! We had a good time. We often go to hotels in Abu Dhabi to relax.

Thanks in advance to anyone who can assist :)
Writing Spanish and reading reading Spanish will help you in a way that
speaking the language wont

[funkcanna]

Thanks Poli :)