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irmamar
October 31, 2010, 01:53 PM
I'm not sure if the syntax is correct:

The Parliamentarians under Cromwell ended the war in August with a victory over the Scots (the Battle of Preston).
Thanks. :)

Rusty
October 31, 2010, 01:56 PM
It seems fine to me.

irmamar
October 31, 2010, 02:07 PM
I wasn't sure where placing 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot. :):rose:

chileno
October 31, 2010, 02:37 PM
I wasn't sure of where to place 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot. :):rose:
:):):)

pjt33
October 31, 2010, 03:27 PM
Escrito originalmente por irmamar http://forums.tomisimo.org/images/smooth-buttons-en-5/viewpost.gif (http://forums.tomisimo.org/showthread.php?p=98474#post98474)
I wasn't sure ofwhere to place 'in August'. But if you tell me that it is correct, it must be. Thanks a lot. :):rose:


Además, yo pondría "(in the Battle of Preston)". No puedo explicar por qué.

laepelba
October 31, 2010, 04:28 PM
Yeah - what they said. The sentence in your original question is great. :)

wafflestomp
October 31, 2010, 09:36 PM
Looks just fine. As for pj's correction of chileno's sentence, I think that saying "sure of" is fine, though just saying sure works as well.

pjt33
November 01, 2010, 02:41 AM
Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.

Perikles
November 01, 2010, 02:45 AM
Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.If it's a dialectical variation, then it's my dialect as well. :rolleyes:

irmamar
November 01, 2010, 06:29 AM
The question was about the first sentence :confused:. But thanks for the help with the second. :D

JPablo
November 08, 2010, 09:56 AM
We sure learned something from it!
By the way, if you want to practice and learn, the film on Cromwell is rather edifying. (I saw it more than 20 years ago, but I think Perikles would approve it...)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cromwell_%28film%29

irmamar
November 08, 2010, 12:50 PM
Thanks for the link. :) Although I don't know when I'll have enough time to watch the film and/or if I'll find it. :thinking: :D

Awaken
November 08, 2010, 01:28 PM
Maybe it's a dialectal variation. I'm not sure what my internalised rule is, but I suspect it's

sure of + NOUN PHRASE
sure + VERB PHRASE

E.g.
I'm sure of it.
I'm not completely sure of his trustworthiness.
I'm sure he'll do it.
I'm not sure when I can come.

Agreed.

JPablo
November 09, 2010, 09:58 PM
Thanks for the link. :) Although I don't know when I'll have enough time to watch the film and/or if I'll find it. :thinking: :D

Well... at least you can see the pictures and see how the worked to make sure the characters were pretty close to the original guys... I mean, lords and commoners...

irmamar
November 10, 2010, 03:13 AM
Thank you, Pablín. :)

JPablo
November 11, 2010, 01:11 PM
You're welcome Irmamarina...! :)

irmamar
November 11, 2010, 01:22 PM
A beautiful name. ;) :rose: