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irmamar
November 16, 2010, 03:10 AM
I'm writing about a rebellion in Ireland:

...but the attempt to seize the power failed and the reaction was hard, with executions and arrests.

Thanks. :)

Perikles
November 16, 2010, 03:26 AM
harsh or severe would be better. :)

(Arrests and executions would be the logical sequence.)

irmamar
November 16, 2010, 05:26 AM
I've changed :), although very few from the arrested were executed.

Thanks. :)

Awaken
November 16, 2010, 08:16 AM
harsh or severe would be better. :)

(Arrests and executions would be the logical sequence.)

100% agree. Harsh and severe are perfect choices here.

chileno
November 16, 2010, 10:16 AM
I've changed :), although very few (of the) people arrested were executed.

Thanks. :)

:):):)

irmamar
November 16, 2010, 12:50 PM
Thanks Awaken and Chileno. :)

Awaken
November 17, 2010, 06:27 AM
Thanks Awaken and Chileno. :)

I think "very few of the arrested" would also work.

irmamar
November 17, 2010, 12:10 PM
I hesitated between 'of' and 'from' (y por la ley de Murphy elegí la equivocada :rolleyes: ).

Thanks. :)