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Urgent Corrections Please!
A:Hola,bueno dias. Como durmiste?
B: Hola yo durmí bien. Ah si antes que me olvide, qual es tu nombre? A: ah, yo lo siento. me llamo Joseph pero usted me puede llamar Jose. B: entonces hablame sobre usted A: Yo tengo ochenta y cuatro anos B: Te ves muy joven! A: mucho gracias , cuantos anos tienes B: preffiero no decir A: no problamo senorita, tienes una hermana? B: Si, yo tengo cinco hermanas y un hermano, y tú A: yo tengo cuatro hermanas y dos hermanos B: muy interesant senor A: Sí B: Como es el tiempo de tú ciudad A: muy frie y muy vient pero no mucha nieve. B: Caray! es siempre soleado donde yo vivo A: que bueno! B: te gusta cantar? A: no si como a cantar B: tu puede bailas? A: Si! yo puedo bailo B: Bueno, se apresuran a aprendes? A: Si, yo aprendes muy rapido. I just need accents, I'm horrible with accents. The words, I'm sure aren't right but that's not the problem. Please? |
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Your problem is not only the accents. You must use capitals also. You have to decide if you want to use either the "tú" or the "usted" form, you can't mix them in the same dialog. I corrected all with "tú", but usually, when you address a person as "señor" or "señorita" you use the "usted" form. Pay attention to spelling. Looking up a word like "problema" in the dictionary can't be that difficult. I can understand the grammar mistakes but not the spelling mistakes.
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