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Old December 05, 2011, 07:26 PM
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Question Short conversational paragraph

The following questions include the material of:

Formal Command
Other elementary level Spanish vocabs and grammars

In the following section, I wrote down the sentence that I composed in Spanish, and the sentence in English right under it, which is what I meant to say.

I will really, really appreciate it if you guys can help me out, thank you very much.

I apologize if I posted this thread into the wrong section.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Short Paragraph Below ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



1,
Introduce yourself, talk about your school, what classes you take, where your school is located, What your favorite classes (or classes) are and describe your teacher.

Hola, Professor R, ¿cómo esta usted?
(Hi, Professor R, How are you doing?)

Me llamo RC, soy de New York,
(My name is RC, I came from New York.)

Yo soy un estudiante en UTNY, mi universidad es en New York del norte.
(I'm a student in UTNY, my university is in the north of New York.)


Yo tengo cinco clases este semestre,
(I have five classes this semester,)


ellas son las lenguas de japonés, las lenguas de chino, las lenguas de español, la matemática, y el novato composición.
(they are Japanese, Chinese, Spanish, math and freshman composition.)


Las lenguas de japonés y español son mis clases favoritas,
(Japanese and Spanish are my favorite classes,)

mi profesor de las lenguas de japonés es muy tímida y bastante,
(the professor of my Japanese class is very shy and quite,)


mi profesor de las lenguas de chino es atrevida y fuerte,
(the professor of my Chinese class is very outgoing and loud,)


mi profesor de las lenguas de español es muy divertida y inteligente.
(the professor of my Spanish class is very funny and smart.)


5,
Describe your favorite dish and how to prepare it. (Be sure to include 5 formal commands and 5 pronouns)

Mi comida favorita es sushi.
(My favorite food is sushi.)


Haga para sushi, necesite preparar el arroz, el vinagre, los algas, la sal y los atúnes.
(In order to make sushi, it is necessary to prepare rice, vinegar, seaweeds, salt, and tunas.)


Primero, ponga el arroz y la vinagre junto.
(First, put the rice and the vinegar together.)


segundo, Ponga la sal en el arroz.
(Second, put the salt into the rice.)


tercero, Combe los algas con el arroz y la vinagre.
(Third, combine the seaweeds with the rice and the vinegar)


cuatro, Ponga las atúnes por encima de arroz.
(Forth, put the tunas above the rice.)


Quinto, Coma.
(Fifth, eat.)


~~~~~~~~~~ Short Conversational Paragraph Ended ~~~~~~~~~~~~


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Old December 05, 2011, 08:49 PM
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1,
Hola, Professor R. ¿Cómo esta usted? (check spelling)
(Hi, Professor R. How are you doing?)

Me llamo RC. Soy de New York. (translate)
(My name is RC. I came from New York.)

(Yo) Soy un (unnecessary) estudiante en (wrong preposition, and an article is needed prior to the intials that follow) UTNY. Mi universidad es en New York del norte (object belongs with the previous preposition ('en'), move the preposition here prior to 'New York').
(I'm a student at UTNY. My university is in the north of New York.)

(Yo) Tengo cinco clases este semestre.
(I have five classes this semester.)


ellas (omit) Son las lenguas (omit) de japonés, las lenguas (omit) de chino, las lenguas (omit) de español, (need a preposition here) la(missing something here) matemática(missing something here), y (need a preposition here) el (check agreement) novato (wrong word, the proper words need to follow the word that follows) composición.
(They are Japanese, Chinese, Spanish, math and freshman composition.)

Las lenguas (wrong word) de japonés y (need a preposition here) español son mis clases favoritas.
(Japanese and Spanish are my favorite classes.)

mi (doesn't match the English version) profesor de las lenguas de japonés es muy tímida (doesn't agree with the subject) y bastante, (wrong word)
(The professor of my Japanese class is very shy and quiet.)

mi profesor de las lenguas de chino es atrevida y fuerte, (wrong word)
(The professor of my Chinese class is very outgoing and loud.)


mi profesor de las lenguas de español es muy divertida y inteligente.
(The professor of my Spanish class is very funny and smart.)
Those are all the hints I have time to give right now.
If you have questions, ask them.
Then correct the text and repost it so we can have another look.
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Old December 05, 2011, 09:10 PM
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Thank you very much for giving me comment on my question

~~~~~~~~~~ Fixed Version below ~~~~~~~~~~~

Hola, Professor R, ¿cómo está usted?

Me llamo RC, soy de New York. Yo soy estudiante en UTNY, mi universidad está en New York del norte. Yo tengo cinco clases este semestre, ellas son las lenguas de japonés, las lenguas de chino, las lenguas de español, la matemática y la composición novata. Las lenguas de japonés y español son mis clases favoritas, mi profesora de Japón es muy tímida y calma, mi profesora de chino es atrevida y fuerte, mi profesor de español es muy divertido e inteligente.

Mi comida favorita es sushi. Haga para sushi, necesite preparar el arroz, el vinagre, los algas, la sal y los atunes. Primero, ponga el arroz y el vinagre junto. Segundo, Ponga la sal en el arroz. Tercero, Combe los algas con el arroz y el vinagre. Cuatro, Ponga los atunes por encima de arroz. Quinto, Coma.

~~~~~~~ Fixed Version Ended ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Old December 05, 2011, 10:50 PM
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Hola, Professor R, ¿cómo está usted?

Me llamo RC, soy de New York. Yo soy estudiante en () UTNY, mi universidad está en New York del norte. Yo tengo cinco clases este semestre, ellas son las lenguas de japonés, las lenguas de chino, las lenguas de español, la() matemática() y la composición novata. Las lenguas de japonés y () español son mis clases favoritas, mi profesora de Japón es muy tímida y calma, mi profesora de () chino es atrevida y fuerte, mi profesor de () español es muy divertido e inteligente.

Mi comida favorita es sushi. Haga para (the preposition precedes the object - a conjugated verb is not expected) sushi, necesite (wrong conjugation) preparar el arroz, el vinagre, los algas (shouldn't be plural, wrong gender), la sal y los atunes (shouldn't be plural). Primero, ponga el arroz y el vinagre junto() (watch agreement - may want to use 'mix' instead of 'put'). Segundo, Ponga la sal en el arroz. Tercero, Combe (check spelling) los algas con el arroz y el vinagre. Cuatro, Ponga los atunes por encima de() (article needed) arroz. Quinto, Coma.
The places marked in green were discussed earlier. Ask questions if you don't understand why they are incorrect.
The things marked in red are in error. I've included some hints as to why.

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Old December 05, 2011, 11:08 PM
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Thank you so much for giving me so much comment and hints

I really appreciate it, thank you.
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