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December 31, 2015, 09:09 AM
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Please check my short paragraph
Are there any grammatical mistakes or strange constructions? Gracias por su ayuda
 "Hay un canal de Youtube llamado FLAMA cuyos videos me gustan mucho ver. El canal está mantenido por un grupo de jóvenes hispanohablantes en los Estados Unidos que hacen videos graciosos sobre su identidad cultural. Se burlan de sí mismos y de los estereotipos que los “blancos” (americanos anglosajones) tienen sobre ellos. En otras palabras, hacen uso de las nuevas tecnologías y del humor para destruir algunos estereotipos erróneos. Otras maneras de luchar contra los estereotipos son a través de las campañas sociales y la elección de representantes de grupos minoritarios a puestos importantes del gobierno y del sector privado." 
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#2
December 31, 2015, 01:38 PM
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Check your construction with "me gustan" your subject is "ver", not the videos.
And if you say "las campañas", your reader should already know which campaigns they are.
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