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La historia de Minnie la perra
I have a dog named Minnie.
Tengo una perra llamado Minnie. We named her Minnie because she is black and squeaks just like Minnie Mouse. La llamamos a Minnie porque ella tiene un pelo negro y chilla tal como Ratona Mimí. My husband and I found her in the woods while we were hiking. Mi esposo y yo la encontramos en el bosque mientras hacíamos senderismo/estabamos haciendo senderismo. We saw her while she was trotting thru the woods. La vimos mientras ella trotaba por el bosque. When she saw us, she stopped and looked, but she was too afraid to approach us. Cuando nos vio, paró y miró, pero ella tenía demasiado miedo acercarnos/se acerca a nosotros. We knelt down and started calling to her. Nos arrodillamos y empezamos llamar a ella. She came a few steps closer as we talked to her. Vino unos pasos más cercano mientras hablabamos con ella. It took about 30 minutes for her to come close enough so that we could pet her. Tardó unos treinta minutos en acercarnos a fin de que pudimos acariciarla. Thirty minutes passed before she finally came closer to us. Pasaron treinta minutos antes de que ella vino por último más próximo a nosotros. |
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Hello, Cmon, I will do my attempt, I hope you can understand me, if you have some doubt above the post, please you don't doubt and asking me.
I have a dog named Minnie. Tengo una perra llamada Minnie. We named her Minnie because she is black and squeaks just like Minnie Mouse. Le llamamos Minnie porque es negra y chilla como la Ratona Mimí. (This post you have mentioned the word Pelo, but I never watch the word Pelo in your oration, then I have change a word suggested, because I feel that without the word Pelo wil sounds better.) My husband and I found her in the woods while we were hiking. Mi esposo y yo la encontramos en el bosque mientras hacíamos senderismo/estabamos haciendo senderismo. Good We saw her while she was trotting thru the woods. La vimos mientras ella trotaba por el bosque. Good When she saw us, she stopped and looked, but she was too afraid to approach us. Cuando nos vio ella, se paró y nos miró, pero ella tenía tanto miedo cuando nos acercarnos (I suggest that way of translate the oration, if you find some mistakes that I did, please let me know, I like the idea of that you found a pretty pet for your home.) We knelt down and started calling to her. Nos arrodillamos y empezamos llamarla ( We Knelt down is translate in Spanish as Arrodillarnos?) She came a few steps closer as we talked to her. Vino unos pasos más cercano mientras hablabamos con ella. ( This post I decide change almost all the text, because I don't make sence it for me, but I putted the best way, that I believed better for your oration, I hope like you the change.) It took about 30 minutes for her to come close enough so that we could pet her. Tardó unos treinta minutos en acerce a nosotros a fin de que pudieramos acariciarla. Thirty minutes passed before she finally came closer to us. Pasaron treinta minutos antes de que ella viniera hacia nosotros. I did my best endeavor in understand your orations, because I found some bit mistakes but, the orations are understanding for me, as I told you, I decided to do some change in your original orations because I believe that they could sound better in itself build. Have a good day.
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me arrodillé = I knelt down nos arridillamos (presente) = we kneel down nos arridillamos (pasado) = we knelt down
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Thank you very much.
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¿Minnie sabe algún trucos?
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nice history.* _*
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Minnie doesn't know any tricks, but she does know how to do everything that I don't want her to.
Minnie no sabe ningún truco pero sabe hacer todo que no la quiero hacer. The story of Minnie Part II coming soon! Tardó unos treinta minutos en acercarnos a fin de que pudieramos acariciarla. Why change acercarnos to acerce a nosotros/venir a nosotros? Is using acercarnos/venirnos just bad grammar? Do a fin de que and antes de que have the same meaning? |
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