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alejandrovig
September 01, 2014, 12:10 AM
...she was selfish and coward enough as to take advantage of the fact that her baby couldn't defend himself to deprive him of his father and raise him as a single mother... when the kid grew up, she saw things in his behavior that she didn't like... but she was too proud and stubborn to accept that raising a kid is like raising a mirror of your own soul, a mirror that u'll be condemned to see every day, growing inside your home... and it's really hard to see how your own defects and, specially, the results of your wrong education appear and grow in the being u most love... so, she stubbornly and cowardly decided to convince herself that those defects and behavior were caused by his dad's gens...

Rusty
September 01, 2014, 01:06 AM
She was selfish and cowardly enough as to take advantage of the fact that her baby couldn't defend himself to deprive him of his father and raise him as a single mother. When the kid grew up, she saw things in his behavior that she didn't like, but (she) was too proud and stubborn to accept that raising a kid is like raising a mirror of your own soul, a mirror that you'll be condemned to see every day, growing inside your home. And it's really hard to see how your own defects and, especially, the results of your poor education appear and grow in the being you most love. So, she stubbornly and cowardly decided to convince herself that those defects and behavior were caused by his dad's genes.Pretty good! :thumbsup:

alejandrovig
September 14, 2014, 09:07 PM
Thank you very much, Rusty)

thanks!