Sentence translation

[Tommiebee123]

Does this make sense?

'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes están la arquitectura y la historia, ambas de las cuales merecen una visita de su propia'.

[aleCcowaN]

It sounds the mushy thing you get using an on-line translator.

[Tommiebee123]

Oh dear! Is there a way of reworking it then?

Thanks for the feedback.

What I intended to say (in English) was:

'However, possibly some of the most important things are the architecture and the history, both of which deserve a visit of their own'.

[aleCcowaN]

Start for fixing the "are the architecture and the history" bit, as they are not places so "estar" is the wrong verb there.

[Tommiebee123]

Is están the only thing I need to fix?

[Rusty]

Besides that, 'de su propia' needs fixed.

Then there's the question, "Is this something a native speaker would say?"

We don't usually use 'visit' with 'architecture' or 'history'. Try using the verbs 'look at' and 'review'.

[Tommiebee123]

How's this for a reworking?

'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes son la arquitectura y la historia que ambas merecen un viaje a pesar de los atractivos cautivodores.