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seanbarkley
April 18, 2018, 06:35 AM
Buenas, agradecería que me ayudaseis si veis algún error o expresión que pueda ser mejorada en este pequeño texto. Muchas gracias y un saludo:

The public defence of the thesis will be held in the University A, and will be transmitted via video conference to the University B, where a court appointed by this same university will be present.

In accordance with the applicable regulations, the court appointed by the University A shall be composed of 5 members and the directors of the thesis may be part of it. One of the members of the court shall be an external expert from outside both universities. There shall not be more than 2 members from each university.

In University B, other court composed of 5 members, appointed by this same university according to its regulations, will be present. The directors of the thesis shall be part of the court.

The University A, in accordance with its regulations, shall confer the title of doctor.

Rusty
April 18, 2018, 08:20 AM
Suggested changes:The public defence of the thesis will be held at University A, and will be transmitted via video conference to the University B, where a court appointed by the second/latter university will be present.

In accordance with the applicable regulations, the court appointed by the University A shall be composed of 5 members and the directors of the thesis may be a part of it. One of the members of the court shall be an external expert from outside both universities. There shall not be more than 2 members from each university.

Another court, composed of 5 members appointed by University B, according to its regulations, will be present. The directors of the thesis shall be a part of the court.

The University A, in accordance with its regulations, shall confer the title of doctor.

seanbarkley
April 19, 2018, 12:32 AM
Thank u so much for your help Rusty!