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Roman
November 03, 2018, 11:15 PM
English my second language so let me know what i can improve about my wording.

Need to translate following into Spanish so it does not sound too offensive or out of line
Decent hard working European man 34yo, do not smoke or drink
wants to build a family based on traditional Cristian values with
devout, family oriented women 18-25yo.

If you know someone who might be interested give this card to her.

Rusty
November 04, 2018, 05:19 PM
Improvements to the English text:

Decent, hard-working 34yo man, European, non-smoker/non-drinker,
wants to build a family based on traditional Christian values with a devout,
family-oriented woman, 18-25yo.

If you know someone who might be interested, (please) give this card to her.

We are not a free translation service. We're a community of language learners. Welcome to the forums!

I suppose you're interested in learning Spanish, else you wouldn't consider printing cards in Spanish hoping to incite a relationship with someone who can read the card. ;)
If you'd be willing to provide us with your own Spanish translation of the English text, we can point out where improvements can be made.

Roman
November 08, 2018, 05:14 PM
We are not a free translation service. We're a community of language learners. Welcome to the forums!

I suppose you're interested in learning Spanish, else you wouldn't consider printing cards in Spanish hoping to incite a relationship with someone who can read the card. ;)
If you'd be willing to provide us with your own Spanish translation of the English text, we can point out where improvements can be made.

I used Rosetta Stone to learn Spanish about year ago, but i have no practice because meeting someone in Los Angeles difficult so i forgot everything.



How about this?
Hombre decente y trabajador de 34 años, europeo, no fumador / no bebedor,
quiere construir una familia basada en los valores cristianos tradicionales con un devoto,
Mujer orientada a la familia, 18-25 años.

Si conoces a alguien que pueda estar interesado, (por favor) dale esta tarjeta a ella.

Rusty
November 08, 2018, 06:36 PM
Hombre decente y trabajador de 34 años, europeo, no fumador / no bebedor, quiere construir una familia basada en los valores cristianos tradicionales con un devoto, Mujer orientada a la familia, 18-25 años.

Si conoces a alguien que pueda estar interesado, (por favor) dale esta tarjeta a ella.Good job!
Just a few changes needed.

"con un devoto, Mujer" needs no comma, no capitalization, and needs to use an adjective, instead of a noun, and it needs to agree in gender with a female it defines.
", 18-25" needs no comma and could use the preposition 'de'.
"Si conoces" should be 'si se conoce'.
"estar interesado" needs to agree in gender with a female.