Role play- quejarse

[ROBINDESBOIS]

CAN ANybody correct this role play for me ?

ROLE 1. you´re white snow. You´re up to the back teeth of the dwarfs. Yu can´t stand cooking any more. You´re really fed up with doing the dishes and washing the dwarfs clothes. You complain yourself about all that.

ROLE 2. You are one of the 8 dwarfs. White Snow is complaining. yOu apologize yourself. You say she is the only woman in the house and you and the other sever dwarfs have to go to work and consequently somebody else has to do the house chores.

ROLE 3. You´re the witch of the tale. You ask White Snow to go live with you because you think she will have a better life by you. You tell her that the dawrfs are bad people and they just want to take advantage of her. You´re a feminist activist and complain about the women´s situation at home.:shh:

[Rusty]

CAN ANybody correct this role play for me ?

ROLE 1. You´re Snow White. You´re fed up with the dwarfs. You can´t stand cooking anymore. You´re really fed up with doing the dishes and washing the dwarfs' clothes. You complain to yourself about all that.

ROLE 2. You are one of the seven dwarfs. Snow White is complaining. You yourself apologize. You say she is the only woman in the house and you and the other six dwarfs have to go to work and consequently somebody else has to do the house chores.

ROLE 3. You´re the witch of the tale. You ask Snow White to come live with you because you think she will have a better life with you. You tell her that the dawrfs are bad people and they just want to take advantage of her. You´re a feminist activist and complain about the women´s situation at home.:shh:Corrections above.

[brute]

Corrections above.

The plural of dwarf can also be dwarves, like scarf/scarves or half/halves. However, I think dwarfs is now more usual since the Disney film.;);)

[ROBINDESBOIS]

Ok. Thank you. Good to know.