Here's the kind of sentence that drives me crazy

[poli]

Segun el británico The Times el productor de la ceremonia Bill Mechanic, que trabajó con Cameron en Titanic no se atrevió que el director se viera
enfrentado a un chiste que podría haberlo ofendido.
According to the British paper The Times, the producer of the ceremony
Bill Mechanic, who worked with Cameron in Titanic woundn't go a far as to say that the director has faced a joke that would have offended him.

I think I translated it well, but at first it was like putting together a puzzle.

[Perikles]

Segun el británico The Times el productor de la ceremonia Bill Mechanic, que trabajó con Cameron en Titanic no se atrevió que el director se viera
enfrentado a un chiste que podría haberlo ofendido.
According to the British paper The Times, the producer of the ceremony
Bill Mechanic, who worked with Cameron in Titanic woundn't go a far as to say that the director has faced a joke that would have offended him.

I think I translated it well, but at first it was like putting together a puzzle.Which way are you translating? :thinking: Should it not be ...that could have offended him?

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

It's true this is not the best kind of sentences ever, and it should have been split into two or three ones... still, some commas wouldn't have harmed:

Según el británico The Times, el productor de la ceremonia, Bill Mechanic, que trabajó con Cameron en Titanic, no se atrevió que el director se viera enfrentado a un chiste que podría haberlo ofendido.

My proposal:

According to the British paper The Times, the producer of the ceremony,
Bill Mechanic --who worked with Cameron in Titanic-- didn't dare to make the director face a joke that might have offended him.

[poli]

It's true this is not the best kind of sentences ever, and it should have been split into two or three ones... still, some commas wouldn't have harmed:



My proposal:

According to the British paper The Times, the producer of the ceremony,
Bill Mechanic --who worked with Cameron in Titanic-- didn't dare to make the director face a joke that might have offended him.
That makes more sense. Thanks