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Haiku Game - Page 2


sosia August 26, 2009 07:36 AM
Estoy viendote
descender la colina,
me haces feliz

Saludos :D

María José August 26, 2009 08:34 AM
Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
Nestled in her arms.

CrOtALiTo August 26, 2009 08:35 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by EmpanadaRica (Post 47697)
Hola crotalito,

Not sure what you mean here sorry? :)

I know you can't translate a poem into another language.. That is not what I did or attempted to do here? :)

Obviously my Spanish isn't good enough to write a good haiku anyway that's ok because like bob I am just experimenting. If Spanish natives have corrections or ideas on how something could be improved this is welcome as per always, bearing in mind that poetry does give license to exercise some 'poetic freedom'.. :D ;)
Yes, look I'm trying to telling you that if you try to translate a poem in another language, it possible that the hang of the same poem is loosen when you have finished the translation.

I hope you can understand me this time.


Sincerely yours.

sosia August 26, 2009 08:36 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by María José (Post 47769)
Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
Nestled in her arms.
I love it, because i have a little baby :applause:

EmpanadaRica August 26, 2009 08:37 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo (Post 47770)
Yes, look I'm telling you, if you try to translate a poem into of another language is possible that the hang of the same poem be loosen.

I hope you can understand me this time.
Not really, I'm afraid.. :rolleyes: :sad:

Quote:
Originally Posted by María José (Post 47769)
Tiny little babe
Delightful bundle of joy
Nestled in her arms.
Beautiful poem!! :thumbsup: :applause:

María José August 26, 2009 08:43 AM
Thanks, guys.:kiss:
I understand what you mean, Sosia. I love babies. My youngest is 5 already, but he's still adorable.

Jessica August 26, 2009 01:57 PM
Real haikus have five
Then seven syllables, right?
Yes, then five again.

ookami August 26, 2009 02:18 PM
En los trigales
el eterno espantajo
aguarda la siembra.

CrOtALiTo August 26, 2009 02:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by EmpanadaRica (Post 47775)
Not really, I'm afraid.. :rolleyes: :sad:



Beautiful poem!! :thumbsup: :applause:
What's.

CrOtALiTo August 26, 2009 02:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sosia (Post 47773)
I love it, because i have a little baby :applause:
Do you've a kid?:D

bobjenkins August 26, 2009 09:27 PM
En el cielo
Para siempre feliz
Nunca descender

Una pregunta, ¿cuántas sílabas? -> El alma amable

ookami August 27, 2009 02:51 AM
El al maa ma ble
5 :)

bobjenkins August 27, 2009 02:57 AM
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Originally Posted by ookami (Post 47928)
El al maa ma ble
5 :)
Muchas gracias! Necesito a hablar como eso:) Es difícil para combinar las sílabas al hablar:banghead:

AngelicaDeAlquezar August 27, 2009 01:33 PM
Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.

EmpanadaRica August 27, 2009 01:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by AngelicaDeAlquezar (Post 48035)
Sólo son 5 en el caso de ese verso, por razones fonéticas... en general, son 6 al separar al-ma-a-ma-ble.
Ahh gracias por la explicación/ elaboración Angelica! ¡Estuvo exactamente lo que me pregunté! :thumbsup: :)

María José August 27, 2009 03:19 PM
Yellow daffodil
Swinging in the humid breeze
Part of England is

EmpanadaRica August 27, 2009 03:45 PM
Vergeet me niet je
te herinneren aan mijn
laatbloeiende liefde

Don't forget to help me
remind you of my
lateblosseming love

'vergeetmenietje' is a flower, 'forgetmenot' :)


A bridging of brave
souls meet, hearts beat on
a vintage-blue wave


Stealing a sweet kiss
The grass seems greener in a
Wishful wedding bliss

Jessica August 27, 2009 03:46 PM
sweet rose, lovely rose
why do you represent love?
roses always die

María José August 27, 2009 05:33 PM
So you don't believe in eternal love, JChen? :love:

Jessica August 27, 2009 05:38 PM
I do, but I'm talking about roses; why does a rose represent love when a rose always dies?


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