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To My Dear and Loving Poem


Jessica February 10, 2011 03:08 PM
To My Dear and Loving Poem
 
la tarea de inglés


To My Dear and Loving Poem
At a desk I think with a pen.

I look at the time; it’s half past ten.

I have to think of what else to write,

Before the clock says, “It’s midnight!”

I will treasure this poem for years to come,

And I don’t care what it’s like to some.

I really like this poem very much,

And I wonder whom else it shall touch.

I will keep this poem because it’s treasure,

I will read it again and again just for pleasure.

I think now it’s time for an end,

I’m going to create a new email then press send.



I need to have at least one sentence inversion. Would the first line be considered that?

Caballero February 10, 2011 03:59 PM
Wow, you're really good at poetry! I couldn't write something like that.

CrOtALiTo February 10, 2011 08:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Jessica (Post 105183)
la tarea de inglés


To My Dear and Loving Poem
At a desk I think with a pen.

I look at the time; it’s half past ten.

I have to think of what else to write,

Before the clock says, “It’s midnight!”

I will treasure this poem for years to come,

And I don’t care what it’s like to some.

I really like this poem very much,

And I wonder whom else it shall touch.

I will keep this poem because it’s treasure,

I will read it again and again just for pleasure.

I think now it’s time for an end,

I’m going to create a new email then press send.



I need to have at least one sentence inversion. Would the first line be considered that?
How you have said, your poem is a treasure in my mind and my dreams, tonight I will go to the bed thinking in your poem, I think in the wonderful of your words and as it involve me in its magics words, therefore I wonder if the world can be divine when I go to asleep.

Sincerely yours.

Jessica February 16, 2011 01:29 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Caballero (Post 105185)
Wow, you're really good at poetry! I couldn't write something like that.

am I? :p I completely made that up :rolleyes:

Apalánter February 16, 2011 03:56 PM
Wow, you're really good in poetry.:) I hope I am. :(

Jessica February 16, 2011 07:35 PM
I think anyone can create a poem if they have some sort of creativity. also the lines doesn't have to rhyme. my poem had to (requirement), but not all poems rhyme, right?

:S

sosia February 17, 2011 03:01 AM
funny :D :D Keep writing!

Perikles February 17, 2011 03:42 AM
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Originally Posted by Jessica (Post 105580)
but not all poems rhyme, right?
Right.

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Some verse rhymes
But this one doesn't

I'm not too sure about the title of your poem, it doesn't sound like meaningful English to me. Loving poem? :thinking:

poli February 17, 2011 06:07 AM
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Originally Posted by Perikles (Post 105598)
Right.

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Some verse rhymes
But this one doesn't

I'm not too sure about the title of your poem, it doesn't sound like meaningful English to me. Loving poem? :thinking:
:idea:Maybe Poem is an overly-creative parent's name for their child or a pet's name.
It is capitalized afterall.
Think outside the box Perii:lol:

Perikles February 17, 2011 06:15 AM
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Originally Posted by poli (Post 105607)
:idea:Think outside the box Perii:lol:
That expression is actually worse than "Have a Nice Day" :lol:

poli February 17, 2011 06:20 AM
Especially if you're a victim of it.
Take care.:)

irmamar February 17, 2011 06:25 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Perikles (Post 105598)
Right.

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Some verse rhymes
But this one doesn't

I'm not too sure about the title of your poem, it doesn't sound like meaningful English to me. Loving poem? :thinking:
That reminds me: To my dear and loving husband, by Bradstreet. ;)

poli February 17, 2011 07:30 AM
Roses are red violets are blue
son rimas frecuentamente empalagosas y muy comunes en que la cuarta
linea termine con una palabra que rima con blue.

Ejemplo:
rosas are red
violets are blue
sugar is sweet
and so are you.

No se si en español existen formularios para rimas así.
Lo que escribió PeriKles es un buen chiste porque no rima.
Todos los anglófonos que conozco están acostumbrado
oirlo terminar con una rima.

Awaken February 17, 2011 08:24 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jessica (Post 105183)
la tarea de inglés

I need to have at least one sentence inversion. Would the first line be considered that?
I don't believe so. It only has a phrase at the beginning, but noun-verb order is still the same. I posted a couple links below that could help and give you ideas.

http://esl.about.com/od/advancedgrammar/a/inversion.htm
http://www.fullspate.net/grammar/inv...n_english.html

CrOtALiTo February 17, 2011 10:39 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jessica (Post 105580)
I think anyone can create a poem if they have some sort of creativity. also the lines doesn't have to rhyme. my poem had to (requirement), but not all poems rhyme, right?

:S
In fact you are right everyone have imagination. So I will keep in mind your council.

Lady Gin February 17, 2011 12:55 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jessica (Post 105580)
I think anyone can create a poem if they have some sort of creativity. also the lines doesn't have to rhyme. my poem had to (requirement), but not all poems rhyme, right?

:S
Hey, I really like your poem, it's very beauty and a little funny n.n
And, yes, I think you're right: Anyone can create a poem.

You seem like a very nice person with those thinkings ^_^

CrOtALiTo February 18, 2011 12:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Lady Gin (Post 105631)
Hey, I really like your poem, it's very beauty and a little funny n.n
And, yes, I think you're right: Anyone can create a poem.

You seem like a very nice person with those thinkings ^_^
Not all the people have the imagination for creates a poem really here in this case the important is use your brain and a dedicate a long time for you and your notebook.

irmamar February 18, 2011 12:52 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by CrOtALiTo (Post 105701)
Not all the people have the imagination for creates a poem really here in this case the important is use your brain and a dedicate a long time for you and your notebook.
You can write a poem (or anything) by hand, you don't need a computer. :D

vita32 February 18, 2011 01:18 PM
Any one can write a poem, you say?

Write about an empty word
or a world that is absurd;
or a meaningless jargon
to describe someone unknown


Use an inkless pen
to express an empty feeling.
Rid oneself of this gall,
communicate to all.

CrOtALiTo February 20, 2011 12:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by irmamar (Post 105702)
You can write a poem (or anything) by hand, you don't need a computer. :D
Almost not I write by my hands something, I'm informatic and all the days I in front to a computer, truly you can write in anything way.


I can empty a poem here in this post, I will search some poem in my children books and later I will go here and write it.:)


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