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Opinions on holiday

Is this a correct translation...thanks -

In my opinion, holidays are very important because they give everyone a break from work. People are able to relax and spend time doing activities that they enjoy. Personally, if I did not get holidays then I would be very stressed. Furthermore, I would not be able to do my work well without some time to rest.

En mi opinión, las vacaciones son muy importantes porque dan todos un descanso del trabajo. Las personas son capaces de relajarse y pasar tiempo haciendo actividades que le gusten. Personalmente, si no recibí vacaciones entonces me gustaría muy destacar. Además, no sería hacer bien mi trabajo sin tiempo para el descanso.

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Originally Posted by ash.corral (Post 119451)

En mi opinión, las vacaciones son muy importantes porque dan (missing something here) todos un descanso del trabajo. Las personas son capaces de relajarse y pasar tiempo haciendo actividades que le(missing something here) gusten. Personalmente, si no recibí (wrong mood - I'd use another verb choice) vacaciones entonces me gustaría muy destacar (doesn't make any sense - don't translate 'then', 'I would be' needs to be translated, followed by the predicate adjective 'stressed' (remember to use the correct ending for yourself)). Además, no sería (wrong verb) hacer bien mi trabajo sin tiempo para el descanso.

I moved your request for a translation to the 'Practice & Homework' forum. We aren't a free translation service. Any practicing of the Spanish language is certainly welcome and in this forum we'll give you hints about the errors we find.

Hints about what can be improved are included above.