Help with text

Originally Posted by Caramelita (Post 136766)

Hello,

I would really appreciate if someone would help me to correct this text I just translated ( need help with the Spanish one:))

( English text- I called him right when he was going to the supermarket, I asked him to buy whole wheat pasta instead of the regular pasta, because the whole wheat pasta has more fibre and is more healthy and nutritious. I hope he will remember it because sometimes he's very forgetful)


Le llamé justo cuando estaba yendo al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, poruqe en la pasta de trigo integral hay más fibra y es más saludable y nutritiva. Espero que lo recuerda porque a veces es muy olvidadizo.

Originally Posted by poli (Post 136767)

I think all this is can easily be understood, but some things can be corrected. I'll try but for more definitive answers, wait for native speakers. A least this bill get the ball rolling.
Le llamé cuando iba al supermercado, le pedí que comprara pasta de trigo integral en vez de pasta regular, porque la integral lleva mas fibra, es mas saludable y nutritiva.

Originally Posted by AngelicaDeAlquezar (Post 136833)

"Espero que" needs the subjunctive, but you used present indicative. ;)