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Help with song lyric


Marshall May 23, 2013 01:57 PM

Help with song lyric
 
Can anyone help me translate the following song lyrics into Spanish?

Lately my hands they don't feel like mine
My eyes been stung with dust, I'm blind
Held you in my arms one time
Lost you just the same

Saludos desde Marshall :confused:

AngelicaDeAlquezar May 23, 2013 04:34 PM

Can you try to post your own proposal so we can help you with corrections and explanations? :)

Marshall June 01, 2013 03:32 PM

Song lyric
 
Ultimamente mis manos no se sienten como mías.
Mis ojos se han llenado de polvo. Estoy ciego.
Te tuve en mis brazos una vez
Y te perdí igual.

Any good?

JPablo June 01, 2013 10:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marshall (Post 138631)
Ultimamente mis manos no se sienten como mías.
Mis ojos se han llenado de polvo. Estoy ciego.
Te tuve en mis brazos una vez
Y te perdí igual.

Any good?

Not bad... I just marked in red the thing on punctuation... but being a song and a bit free, I'd buy your translation.

(Let's see if others are a bit more critical than me... but from my standpoint, as said, good on you!) :thumbsup:

I mean, I could give you my version, like "y te perdí igual" "y te perdí de todas formas" or other opinions to improve it, but the basic concepts are there...

Rusty June 02, 2013 08:14 AM

To me, the punctuation was correct.


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