Comentario Lingüístico - Check needed

Comentario Lingüístico - Check needed
 

Hola a todos,


I need a check of some paragraphs of a linguistic comment (those which I feel most insecure about).

The piece is rather long, 5 pages, and the paragraphs themselves are between 20-30 lines. Is that too long to be corrected in this forum?
Is there any user who is able and willing to correct either the whole thing or at least the two paragraphs for me via PM or something?

I can REALLY appreciate any kind of help.

Really would appreciate help!