is this written correctly.....

hola	August 10, 2008 12:57 PM

is this written correctly.....

mira a nuestras edades....no puedo creer que no me vees asi.

CrOtALiTo

August 10, 2008 02:46 PM

Hi, Hola, yea your text is more or less wrote, but you can use this phrase too.

Mira las edades que tenemos, y no puedo creer que no veas asi como yo quiero que me veas.

sosia

August 10, 2008 03:02 PM

I suppose it's so:
"mira que edad tenemos.... no puedo creer que no me veas así"
"Look what age whe both have... I can't believe that you don't see me so."

saludos :D

Alfonso

August 10, 2008 04:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hola (Post 13735)

Mira a nuestras edades... No puedo creer que no me veas así.

I understand that written correctly also include orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything more.

María José

August 10, 2008 06:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alfonso (Post 13760)

I understand that written correctly also includes orthography.

I can only see a grammatical mistake, the morphology of veas.

There are more options to express the same thing, but I don't think you need to change anything else.

I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...;)

Alfonso

August 11, 2008 02:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by María José (Post 13765)

I hope my corrections do not confuse you. But you can always write a letter of complaint...;)

Thanks a lot for your corrections. They are really clear.

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