Spanish Homework - Essay (70 words)

Spanish Homework - Essay (70 words)

Hello, could you please check if I have correct spelling in my homework?

-Cuando abacado la escuela, espero que consigo en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor. Ojala que estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy a Canadá y tiene pequeňo casa en montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la vida tranquilo y largo. Quiero tener mi propía pub. Deseo que lago en mi jardín. Espero que tener mucho dinero y feliz vida.-

I am really bad at spanish language at school because our teacher is really bad at explaining things but I am tring my best to speak at least a bit good. She gave us homework to write a short essay (70 words) on what we want to do in our life. I have to use phrases "Qué + subjuntivo; Ojala; Espero; Quiero; Deseo". Big thanks if you can help. :)

I've marked misspelled words here.

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Originally Posted by Faust0222 (Post 147848)

Cuando abacado la escuela, espero que consigo en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor. Ojala que estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy a Canadá y tiene pequeňo casa en montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la vida tranquilo y largo. Quiero tener mi propía pub. Deseo que lago en mi jardín. Espero que tener mucho dinero y feliz vida.

The spelling errors are the least of your worries. There are many grammatical errors.

Thank you! Sorry to annoy you but could you help me also with that gramatical mistakes? I hoped at least my grammar is fine :/

If the objective was to use the subjunctive, you need to review your lessons and conjugation; you aren't conjugating in subjunctive at all (!) and in many constructions you didn't even include the needed verbs for expressing wishes.
Also, check your dictionary; vocabulary, gender and spelling mistakes (including those that have been already signaled) are marked in green.

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Originally Posted by Faust0222 (Post 147848)

-Cuando abacado (Be careful, this is not Spanish, and the verb should be conjugated; you're only writing a participle) la escuela, espero que consigo (wrong conjugation; this is present and you need a subjunctive; plus, you also need what you want to get) en la universita de medicina. Que sea un doctor (This is expresing a wish, but you don't say for whom). Ojala que *** (Article missing here) estudio no será muy difícil. Deseo que voy (Wrong construction, check your subjunctives) a Canadá y tiene (Wrong person and conjugation) pequeňo casa (Wrong gender agreement and be careful: "ň" is not ñ) en *** (Article missing here) montaňas. Me gusta la natura en Canadá. Quiero *** (Verb or article missing here) esposa pero no quiero niňos. Quiero tener la (Indefinite article instead) vida tranquilo y largo (Check gender agreement). Quiero tener mi propía pub (Check either vocabulary or gender agreement). Deseo que lago en mi jardín (This is fragmentary. You need a conjugated verb to make sense). Espero que tener mucho dinero y *** (Article missing here) feliz vida.-

Thanks for all your help, I remade it and I will let you know what mark did I get for it :)