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Entitled to redeem

Xinfu

June 06, 2014 03:20 AM

Entitled to redeem

My terms and conditions draft:

1.This voucher is only entitled to redeem 8 pieces of Delicate Cake priced at $4 at Max's Cake.
2. This voucher cannot be exchangeable for cash.
3.This offer cannot be used in conjunction with Max's Cake Coupon.
4. Only original voucher is accepted.

Are my sentences correct and natural English?

Rusty

June 06, 2014 06:50 AM

Numbers 1 and 2 are OK, but I would personally not choose 'entitled to redeem' and 'cannot be exchangeable'.
Number 3 is very natural English.
Number 4 needs an article.

poli	June 06, 2014 08:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xinfu (Post 149751)

My terms and conditions draft:

1.This voucher is only entitled to redeem 8 pieces of Delicate Cake priced at $4 at Max's Cake.
2. This voucher cannot be exchangeable for cash.:bad:
3.This offer cannot be used in conjunction with Max's Cake Coupon.
4. Only original voucher is accepted.

Are my sentences correct and natural English?

1) With this voucher you are entitled to redeem 8.....
2)This voucher cannot be exchanged for cash.

Xinfu

June 06, 2014 11:15 AM

Thank you~

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