When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped

ROBINDESBOIS

March 07, 2015 10:37 AM

When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped

1. When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped, she took a gun and wander about the streets to find who hold captivated her own flesh and blood.
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Rusty

March 07, 2015 11:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ROBINDESBOIS (Post 154180)

When she learnt her daughter had been kidnapped, she took a gun and wandered about the streets to find who held captivated her own flesh and blood.

Corrected.
It can also read, "... to find who held her own flesh and blood captive."

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