Sentence translation

Sentence translation
 

Does this make sense?

'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes están la arquitectura y la historia, ambas de las cuales merecen una visita de su propia'.

It sounds the mushy thing you get using an on-line translator.

Oh dear! Is there a way of reworking it then?

Thanks for the feedback.

What I intended to say (in English) was:

'However, possibly some of the most important things are the architecture and the history, both of which deserve a visit of their own'.

Start for fixing the "are the architecture and the history" bit, as they are not places so "estar" is the wrong verb there.

Is están the only thing I need to fix?

Besides that, 'de su propia' needs fixed.

Then there's the question, "Is this something a native speaker would say?"

We don't usually use 'visit' with 'architecture' or 'history'. Try using the verbs 'look at' and 'review'.

How's this for a reworking?

'No obstante, posiblemente unas de las cosas más importantes son la arquitectura y la historia que ambas merecen un viaje a pesar de los atractivos cautivodores.