Pronunciation of a sentence

Pronunciation of a sentence
 

Hello. I want your help to check my pronunciation of this sentence:
Carmen va a la oficina.
https://vocaroo.com/i/s0onVeDrcW4x
I´m working on my accent. Please say me what sounds are pronounced bad?
How much is heard Russian accent?

There is a foreign accent, but everyone will understand what you say, so I wouldn't be worried. :)

For a more natural pronunciation, try accenting "Carmen" on "car" and not on "men", and don't separate each word from each other: in "va a", a native speaker almost says just "va", and try to avoid making a pause between "la" and "oficina". ;)

Muchas gracías