Mi rutina diaria

[Shreyabhat]

Hola amigos

aquí es mi rutina diaria.

Yo trabaja en empresa de construcción. Me levanta a las 6 y trabajar a las 10. Vuelvo a casa a las cinco de media. Jugar con hijo en parque. Cenar con mi familia a las nueve. Acuesto a las 10.


Please guide for the grammar.

[Liquinn3]

Originally Posted by Shreyabhat

Hola amigos

aquí es mi rutina diaria.

Yo trabaja en empresa de construcción. Me levanta a las 6 y trabajar a las 10. Vuelvo a casa a las cinco de media. Jugar con hijo en parque. Cenar con mi familia a las nueve. Acuesto a las 10.


Please guide for the grammar.

A sentence begins with a capital letter and ends in a full stop.

The second part of my feedback:

You've repeated this error twice.
'guide for the grammar' is not proper English. As Rusty previous stated in another one of your threads.

I'll let someone else give you help with your Spanish.

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

Good job.

Here are some suggestions to improve your text:

Originally Posted by Shreyabhat

Hola amigos

aquí (Always start a new sentence with a capital letter) es (Check the differences between "ser" and "estar") mi rutina diaria.

Yo trabaja (Check conjugation for first person) en *** (Article missing here) empresa de construcción. Me levanta (check conjugation for first person) a las 6 y trabajar (This verb must be conjugated) a las 10. Vuelvo a casa a las cinco de (Wrong preposition; check how to tell the hour) media. Jugar (This verb must be conjugated) con *** (Possessive missing here) hijo en *** (Article missing here) parque. Cenar (This verb must be conjugated) con mi familia a las nueve. Acuesto (Check reflexive verbs) a las 10.


Please guide for the grammar.

[Shreyabhat]

Thanks to all.
As I am studying this language self , it is possible that there are many mistakes.
I want to learn this language with the help of all of you my friends.

thanks again.

Regards
Shreya