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Old May 05, 2015, 06:24 AM
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I need this pragraph checked for mistakes

para llevar una vida saludable debes tener habitos de vida bueno o si no los tienes debes cambiarlos
debes ejercitarte regularmente al menos trota media hora en las mañanas
Aliméntate lo mas natural possible ,aunque algunas dicen dormir 6 horas no es malo
debes,procurar dormir 8 horas minimo.no tomes alcohol,no fumes,no te drogues,no seas perezosa toma minimo 2 litres de agua diarios.debes llevar tambien una vida e equilibrio No te estreses, no te enojes, no te impacientes

this pargraph is important for me please let me know if there is any mistakes
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Old May 05, 2015, 09:44 PM
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I marked spelling mistakes, including capital letters, accents, and incorrect or missing punctuation in blue. When that's corrected, it will be easier to help you with the rest.

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para llevar una vida saludable debes tener habitos de vida bueno (??? Is this gender agreement mistake or do you need a punctuation sign?) o si no los tienes debes cambiarlos***
debes ejercitarte regularmente *** al menos trota media hora en las mañanas***
Aliméntate lo mas natural possible ,aunque algunas dicen dormir 6 horas no es malo ***
debes,procurar dormir 8 horas minimo.no tomes alcohol,no fumes,no te drogues,no seas perezosa *** toma minimo 2 litres de agua diarios.debes llevar tambien una vida e equilibrio *** No te estreses, no te enojes, no te impacientes***
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